Could you help me to correct this English writing,Thank you!
Dear friends,
I am a senior student from the department of Chinese and literature in this university.I am writing this letter for the purpose of introducing a famous Chinese celebrity.
It,to begin with,seems my argument that Jack Ma is one of the most famous Chinese celebrities.He is so creative that he built up Internet Cyber platform.Secondly,he is not only smart in making money,but also proficient in English.English is so important,which could be accepted by every youngster on campus.Another element I must point out here is that he often cooperate with others.It is cooperate with others that enable he to be successful and well-known in the world.
Hope you can learn some trait from he.I would appreciate you also admit.Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Li Ming

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Could you help me to correct this English writing,Thank you!
Dear friends,
    I am a senior student from the department of Chinese and literature in this university.I am writing this letter for the purpose of introducing a famous Chinese celebrity.
It,to begin with,seems my argument that Jack Ma is one of the most famous Chinese celebrities.He is so creative that he built up Internet Cyber platform.Secondly,he is not only smart in making money,but also proficient in English.English is so important,which could be accepted by every youngster on campus.Another element I must point out  here is that he often cooperate with  others.It is cooperate with others that enable he to be successful and well-known in the world.
     Hope you can learn some trait from he.I would appreciate you also admit.Look forward to hearing from you.
                                                                                                                                                                Yours truly,
                                                                                                                                                                      Li Ming

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Dear friends,
    I am a senior student from the Chinese language and literature department in this university.I am writing this letter for the purpose of introducing a famous Chinese celebrity.
   Firstly, I'd say Jack Ma is not only one of the most recognizable Chinese celebrities , but one of the most famous people in the World .He is famous for his creativity, as you might know he built up Internet Cyber platform.Secondly,he is not only good in making money,but also good in learning languages: he is proficient in English. I bet every student in the campus would agree with the fact, that English is very important nowadays. And the last, but not the least, what I must point out here is that he is good at  cooperating with others.In my opinion that's what makes him so successful and well-known in the world.
     Hope all of us will learn from him.             
                                                                                                                       Look forward to hearing from you.
                                                                                                                                                                Yours truly,
                                                                                                                                                                      Li Ming

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