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Could you please help me correct the writing, thank you very much!
As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy, sitting in front of a computer, is going to choose some projects. However, he is confused what kinds of projects he should select, whether the project that is new, creative and a little difficult or that is easy to attain higher grades, to pass and has less homework. Under the picture, the caption reads, “the process of selecting projects ”.
Actually, we may all face the same situation like the man that have non idea which project to select in the end. As far as I am concerned, the projects we choose should depend on our own interests and our plan in professional learning. Before selecting projects, we should have a clear grasp about what aspects I am weak and need to strengthen my skills on that, which is the reason we make the choice, or it will be meaningless. At the same time, we need to weight our ability in order to choose the course that is suitable for ourselves. For instance, if you’re just a junior computer programming engineer, but you choose a course that is aimed to senior engineer, then you are probably won’t pass the exam.
All in all, what courses you are going to choose should be the one that you want and need.
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An Invitation Letter
Dear All International Experts,
On behalf of our school, I am pressure to invite all of you to come to the graduation ceremony, which will be held in the Student’s Hall at next Sunday.
Each of you will receive an invitation card that is printed in a table number. So it will be easy and convenient for you to find your seat. During the graduation ceremony, there will be numerous exciting performances presented by our students. Also, you will be provided with delicious fruits and snakes.
Finally, I would like to express my warmest welcome to you for your presence at the ceremony.
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Could you please help me correct the text? Thank you very much!
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon that a boy is running to the final point in a running race, with a smile on his face. The caption below the drawing reads that an ending point is another new starting point.
What the drawing wants to tell us is that our life journey is a persistent process which never get a certain end unless we die. Besides, we should be prepared to complete the whole running that may be boring but is a meaningful journey in which you will gain a lot. Because of the persistent running, What we have achieved during the previous period will definitely influence the following process. As a result, the every step we take is of great significance and should be paid attention.
The example I want to use to illustrate the meaning of the picture is ourselves, as undergraduates who are going to get the ending point of college life and then start a new brand life in the near future. There is almost no time leaving for us to wait a second to face the real society, which is more challenging and competitive than college. As consequences, what can we do is to arm ourselves with more professional skills and social manners to deal with the next journey.
November 13, 2019
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Please help me correct my writing, thank you very much!
In the above picture, it presents a key moment in the football game, while the gatekeeper imagines that he is too small to keep the ball out of the gate, however, the player regards the gatekeeper as a giant, so it is impossible for him to shoot the ball into the gate.
Both of them underestimate their abilities while overestimate the abilities of their rivals. What reflects in the picture is that they all have no confidence in themselves, which is an essential quality in today’s competitive society. It teaches us that no matter in what situation, all we should do is having a clear grasp of our ability and pursuing our goal bravely.
There are numbers of examples illustrating the importance of confidence. One of that is Jay Chou, who is one of the most popular singers in the world. He doesn’t mind how others comment on his singing style and insist on his own understanding of music. He has a great confidence in his talent in music and believes that his music will become unique. In the end, he makes it, and become a great singer.
Only by believing in ourselves can it be possible to achieve the potential achievements and meet better future.
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Prevent Our Environment from “White Pollution “
Dear Editors,
It is becoming even more serious of “White Pollution “ in many cities, and it is seems like that the use of plastic bags does not decrease and even becomes more prevalent. This is a dangerous social phenomenon, which is harm to the earth —the home to all humans —and must be restricted.
I would like to give some suggestions on the issue. First, the whole society are supposed to persuade consumers choosing sustainable bags, like cloth bags which can be used for so many times and be cycled. Second, regulations should be made to forbid the production of plastic bags, which can cut the resource of “White Pollution “. Finally, children and young people should receive the education of environmental protection, making them own strong awareness of green life.
Here are my suggestions above, and I hope that you would take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming.
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Social Network
It is depicted in the picture that so many people are sitting in the net and concentrating on their computers. While so closed they are, they seem like to have no communication with each other.
What the picture reveals is a common phenomenon in today’s Internet world, in which all kinds of electronic products are occupied in our life, and the ways of communication become full of diversity so that face-to -face communication is not necessary. However, communication via Internet couldn’t convey emotional feelings which can only be seen by eye-to -eye touching. It is hardly possible for us to know what the other is thinking about in their mind just by words made by keyboard.
To avoid the relationship among people gets worse, necessary measures should be made. We can organize some neighborhood parties aimed to communicate with your neighbors. Besides, families can hold some dinner talkings which provide an opportunity for family members to share their funny things in daily life.
Human beings are social animals, which means we can not isolate ourselves from others.
October 22, 2019
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The Importance of Confidence
In the above picture, it presents a key moment in the football game, while the gatekeeper imagines that he is too small to keep the ball out of the gate, however, the player regards the gatekeeper as a giant, so it is impossible for him to shoot the ball into the gate.
Both of them underestimate their abilities while overestimate the abilities of their rivals. What reflects in the picture is that they all have no confidence in themselves, which is an essential quality in today’s competitive society. It teaches us that no matter in what situation, all we should do is having a clear grasp of our ability and pursuing our goal bravely.
There are numbers of examples illustrating the importance of confidence. One of that is Jay Chou, who is one of the most popular singers in the world. He doesn’t mind how others comment on his singing style and insist on his own understanding of music. He has a great confidence in his talent in music and believes that his music will become unique. In the end, he makes it, and become a great singer.
Only by believing in ourselves can it be possible to achieve the potential achievements and meet better future.
October 20, 2019
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Suggestion Letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student in this university who often come to the library to study. I have found some services that the library can improve to make the experience here more friendly. So I am writing to make some suggestions.
Firstly, the library can consider adding an online booking service, which allows we students book a seat through phones or computers. Secondly, it will be perfect if the library can provide a space where students can have a cup of coffee and just relax themselves after a long time of learning. Finally, I hope that the opening time of the library can be extended for longer , as a lot of students want to learn more.
I sincerely hope that you can take my suggestions above into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming.
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Apology Letter
Dear Mr. Wang
I am very sorry for that I am going to quit my job as an editor for the magazine Design & Fashion.
First, I very appreciate you for giving me the chance to work here. However, what I learned in university previously is Urban Planning, which is so different from fashion design. As a result, I am very short of sensibility of fashion and unsuitable for this kinds of job. Perhaps, there are someone else who are skillful at fashion design looking for this kinds of occupation.
Sincere apologies to you if any inconvenience I have caused. I promise that I will do my utmost to assist in the hand-over process.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming.
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Cooperation Spirit
In this picture, two disabled men throw away their sticks, and then unit together, enabling them to run faster than ever before. Under the picture, there is sentence saying that”You have one leg, and I have one leg. If united together, we can go anywhere we want”.
It is proven that cooperative spirit is a huge power to push us go further. It becomes even more difficult for us to work alone without any support from the outside in today’s competitive society. After all, one’s ability is limited, which means that we may miss the potential greater achievements made by a team.
As far as I am concerned, all we students should develop such a cooperative ability, which will benefit us in schools and workplaces definitely. In school, it is hard to imagine that how one person can organize a activity well or complete a complex task without any other helps or advice from others. When entering into a company, we will be required to have abilities working with other colleagues well. It will be very difficult for you to work with others if you have never cooperated with others previously.
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