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Cooperation Spirit In this picture, two disabled men throw away their sticks, and then unit together, enabling them to run faster than ever before. Under the picture, there is sentence saying that”You have one leg, and I have one leg. If united together, we can go anywhere we want”. It is proven that cooperative spirit is a huge power to push us go further. It becomes even more difficult for us to work alone without any support from the outside in today’s competitive society. After all, one’s ability is limited, which means that we may miss the potential greater achievements made by a team. As far as I am concerned, all we students should develop such a cooperative ability, which will benefit us in schools and workplaces definitely. In school, it is hard to imagine that how one person can organize a activity well or complete a complex task without any other helps or advice from others. When entering into a company, we will be required to have abilities working with other colleagues well. It will be very difficult for you to work with others if you have never cooperated with others previously.

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Cooperation Spirit

In this picture, two disabled men throw away their sticks, and then unite together, enabling them to run faster than ever before. Under the picture, there is sentence saying that”You have one leg, and I have one leg. If united together, we can go anywhere we want”.
It is proven that cooperative spirit is a huge power to push us to go further. It becomes even more difficult for us to work alone without any support from the outside in today’s competitive society. After all, one’s ability is limited, which means that we may miss the potential greater achievements made by a team.
As far as I am concerned, all we students should all develop such a cooperative ability, which will definitely benefit us in schools and workplaces definitely. In school, it is hard to imagine that how one person can organize an activity well or complete a complex task without any other helps or advice from others. When entering into a company, we will be required to have abilities of working with other colleagues well. It will be very difficult for you to work with others if you have never cooperated with others previously.

Nice sentence construction, minimal errors.

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