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Please, correct my English writing.
Where does it come from “ Steve can probably live for 6 weeks at most.”?
It was heard that Steve left from his work for days because of illness. Daily magazine reports that his
condition is worse than we heard. The Inquirer magazine said that his illness is worse than we expected
so he could live for only six weeks based on some shocking photos showing that he is really sick.
Steve in the photos wears jeans and they looks loose because he seems to lose weight. It seems that he
Is getting side-effects because of cancer cure. Some doctors said that he had a cancer again so he lost
45-pound weight. They guess that he could live for 6-weeks. Some people around him said that he can’t
Walk smoothly and seems like so painful when we walks.
However, there are some optimistic articles. Business insider reports that Steve showed up in the
headquarter of Apple and some people saw him. One of the employees who saw him wrote on his
blog that he ran into steve when he walked out of the headquarter of coopertino.
The truth about steve’s gossip will be judged soon. ABC reported that he will join the business leaders in
San Francisco held by president Obama.
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correct my english.
Valentine's day.
There are many couples who exchange gifts each other on Valentine's day.
However, in Korea, women give chocolate to men on Valentine's day and
then men give candy to women on White day March 14th.
I think candy companies make this day to increase their benefits.
When I was a kid, there was no White day as I remember.
I am definitely sure that if you are single and you correct my writing, you will
get an awesome boy or girlfriend.
If you are married, you already have a woderful spouse.
Have a good day.
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Is there any difference? "Talk to me, Talk with me"
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JINOK PARK's notebook entry: Oct 08, 2010
Hello.
Please, feel free to correct my writing.
Weclome everyone.
One of the familiar TOEFL topic.
Attending a live performance(for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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If we attend a live performance, we can enjoy much better than watching TV at home. I know that there are couple of merits to watch TV. For example, we can save time and money. We don't have to wait for a long time in front of a concert hall. However, why many people do want to go to a concert, even though they know that they have to wait for a long time? They know that enjoying the concert in a live performance is more fun than enjoying it at home. When I was a high school student, I went to the stadium to see baseball. That was the first time I went to the stadium. I've never forgot the day because it was so much fun compared to watching the game on TV. After that, mostly, I go to the stadium to see baseball.
Thank you for your help.
Have a good day.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi!
I'm Jinok Park from South Korea.
I'm a graduate student studying statistics in America.
I have difficulty in understanding lecutres because my English is not so good as other's.
I'm looking for someone to help my Englsih writing.
Is there anybody who can help? pleas, email me^^
If there is someone studying korean language, I can help you as much as I can. If you are a native speaker in English, we can help each other.
Thank you.
Hopelly, I want to find one to help each other.
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