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Writing Club: Day 11
This is the Writing Club, a place where everyone can write an essay about a topic that will change daily. You can write about what you want and feel.
For today's topic you have to describe a celebration of your country.
This is not a competition; mistakes are welcome here.
<em>The writing club is going to become weekly.</em>
if someone wants correction, put in your text "This text allows correction".
My essay:
In Brazil, we have a celebration called Carnival (Carnaval), it is celebrated in February for at least one week, in this festival, we dress up, go to the streets and dance all day, following a “trio elétrico”, some states have samba schools, and they make a special parade with huge structures and awesome choreography, these schools battles for the tittle of champion of the year.
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Writing Club: Day 10
This is the Writing Club, a place where everyone can write an essay about a topic that will change daily. You can write about what you want and feel.
For today's topic you have to describe a child’s play (what you played when you were a kid).
This is not a competition; mistakes are welcome here.
if someone wants correction, put in your text "This
text allows correction".
My essay
When I was a kid, I played with my brothers a game called: detective, victim and assassin (detetive, vitima e assasino), in this game you must write the names in a paper, cut it and then chose blindly. If you pick the detective, you must look for the assassin among the victims, and shout “You are under arrest”, when you find him. If you pick the assassin you must kill the victims, to do this you have to blink to them. If you pick the victim you must die when an assassin blinks to you, however you will not die instantly you need to wait 2 or 3 seconds, to not reveal the assassin.
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Writing Club: Day 9
This is the Writing Club, a place where everyone can write an essay about a topic that will change daily. You can write about what you want and feel.
For today's topic you have to continue the story.
This is not a competition, mistakes are welcome here.
Amanda was jogging in a park when it started to rain, she got so upset, she thought: right in the day she was jogging, it rains. She started running trough the trees to cut the distance to the exit, when she heard something following her, her heart accelerates...
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Writing Club: Day 8
This is the Writing Club, a place where everyone can write an essay about a topic that will change daily. You can write about what you want and feel.
For today's topic you have to describe a feeling you don't like
This is not a competition, mistakes are welcome here.
I don't like to think about time, because I always look back to the past, and remember bad memories but this is not what makes me sad, actually the happy memories make me sad, this makes me feel a void, I don't know how to describe this feeling, when this feeling become overwhelming I try to think in the future, but after that I think about all the people I will eventually lose, like my parents, brothers and friends. After this, it's only me dying and becoming the nostalgia of someone. So I try only to think in the present and in the near future.
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Daily Writing: Day 3
This morning I waked up early because of the interview, practiced a little in front of a mirror and then I took the bus and went to the interview, getting there I find out that only 7 people would be doing the interview, I became relaxed, in the HR room I did my presentation, feeling really good about this, and then a man with 4 internships gives his, I just smiled because I was destroyed inside. Well... laugh to keep from crying.
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Writing Club: Day 7
This is the Writing Club, a place where everyone can write an essay about a topic that will change daily. You can write about what you want and feel.
For today's topic you have to describe a person ( that person can be fictional)
This is not a competition, mistakes are welcome here.
This is a fictional person:
John is a middle-aged man,he has brown skin, he has green oval eyes and a round face with a full beard, he has short grizzled straight hair, he is tall and has a well-built body from his past days in college, he can be really scary to strangers, but who knows him, knows this is a misconception, he is a volunteer in the local community and donates to an orphanage, he is so kind that sometimes irritate, he has three adopted sons that he raised alone, at that time some people around him said that he was being selfish when adopting these children, because he was a lone person and had never gotten in a relationship, but after all he raised them with love, and they love him and that is what matter.
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Para os estudantes de português brasileiro, que querem ajuda em textos.
Quem tive alguma duvida em algum texto em português, e quiser melhorar sua redação, poste lá no caderno, eu sempre confiro o mesmo e busco explica da melhor forma possível, o porquê de tal parte está errada, assim criando uma nova mentalidade ao escrever em português, por consequência melhorando sua fluência no geral.
Posso fazer essas correções em inglês ou português. Só depende de você
For those who have questions about Portuguese writing, and want to develop they redaction ability,just post on the notebook, I always check it and looks for ways to explain the best manner on writing in Portuguese, and the reason why that part on the text is wrong, therefore creating a new thinking when writing in Portuguese, thus increasing your fluency in general.
I can make these corrections in Portuguese or English, it is up to you.
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English tenses when telling a story
When I am telling a story in English I always feel confused if I have to use past simple or present perfect, so could someone here say which one is better to use when telling stories in the past?
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Writing Club: Day 6
This is the Writing Club, a place where everyone can write an essay about a topic that will change daily. You can write about what you want and feel.
For today's topic you have to describe what you like to do in your free time.
This is not a competition, mistakes are welcome here.
In my free time I like to read books and manga, especially if it's about zombies, when I am not reading I watch YouTube videos about anything that I want to know, and play MMORPG, like GW2 and Wow.
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Writing Club: Day 5
This is the Writing Club, a place where everyone can write an essay about a topic that will change daily. You can write about what you want and feel.
For today's topic you have to create an uncommon dialogue
This is not a competition, mistakes are welcome here.
Sarah: What's up!
Eliza: What's up!
Sarah: I've just passed Amanda, and she was crying, what have happened?
Eliza: Haven't you known? Her boyfriend cheated on her.
Sarah: What? Well.., she has finally found out.
Eliza: Hmm? You already knew?
Sarah: Yeah! I am the person he cheated with!
Eliza: OMG!
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