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Let me introduce myself. My name is Lyubov Victorovna. I am fifty five years old. I was born in Irkutsk and have lived here all my life. I have a mother, daughter, two sisters, three grandchildren. Granddaughter Rita is nine years old, she is in third grade. She plays the piano and graws well. Grandson Matthew is five years old, he is very good graws and sculpts. Grandson Arthur is eight years old, he studing in the second grade. he likes to design and dance. I work in kindergarden head. Ilike my work very much. I have been working in kindergarden for thuryt fife years. I love childrens. I try to create conditions in kindergarden for childrens to be comfortable and cozy. I study at the Irkutsk state Univercity. I want to get higher education and continue to work in kindergarden. thank you for your attantion.