Role of smartphone in my life , could you please give me correction.
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Role of smartphone in my life
I think smartphone has great role in human life.
I would like to start with the Advantages. Smartphone helped me to reach most of the source of knowledge in almost every field I like.
 Through smartphone I took the issue of learning English language as serious as it should be. So I downloaded many of useful applications to help me in improving my skills especially in writing.
By looking backward I can notice how far my language became through using smartphone in learning.
Also, it gave me a space for Saving pictures and memories. Beside to Reminding me of my important events and my daily schedule.
However, my phone stole alot of hours and some times disrtict my mind away of seeing my family or doing my duties as it should be. I noticed that sometimes when I am sitting with my family I present only physically but not mentally.