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Role of smartphone in my life , could you please give me correction. hello everyone , could you please give me correction and advice about my text ? thanks in advance. Role of smartphone in my life I think smartphone has great role in human life. I would like to start with the Advantages. Smartphone helped me to reach most of the source of knowledge in almost every field I like.  Through smartphone I took the issue of learning English language as serious as it should be. So I downloaded many of useful applications to help me in improving my skills especially in writing. By looking backward I can notice how far my language became through using smartphone in learning. Also, it gave me a space for Saving pictures and memories. Beside to Reminding me of my important events and my daily schedule. However, my phone stole alot of hours and some times disrtict my mind away of seeing my family or doing my duties as it should be. I noticed that sometimes when I am sitting with my family I present only physically but not mentally.

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Role of smartphone in my life , could you please correct.
Hello everyone , could you please correct and advise about my text ?

Thanks in advance.





Role of smartphone in my life

I think smartphone has a great role in everyone's life.
I would like to start with the advantages. Smartphone helps me to reach most of the sources of knowledge in almost every field I like.

 Through smartphone I took the issue of learning English language as serious as it should be. So I downloaded many of the useful applications to help me in improving my skills especially in writing.
Looking back, I can notice how far my language has improved from learning with the help of a smartphone.
Also, it gave me a space for saving pictures and memories and helps me be reminded of my important events and my daily schedule.

However, my phone took alot of my time and some times distracted my mind away from seeing my family or doing my duties. I noticed that sometimes when I am sitting with my family I just physically present there but not mentally.
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hello everyone , could you please give me a hand to correct and piece of advice about my text ?

thanks in advance.

Role of smartphone in my life

I think smartphone has great role in human life.
I would like to start with the Advantages. Smartphone help me reach most of the sources of knowledge in almost every field I like.
 Through smartphone I overcome the issue of learning English language as serious as it should. So I download many of useful applications to help me improve my skills especially in writing.
By looking backward I can notice how far my language became through using smartphone in learning.
Also, it gave me a space for Saving pictures and memories. Beside, Remind me of my important events and my daily schedule.
However, my phone takes a lot of hours and sometimes distinct my mind away of seeing my family or doing my duties as it should be. I noticed that sometimes when I am sitting with my family I present only physically but not mentally.

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