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July 24, 2022
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Helen Keller I choose Helen Keller for Independent Writing Project because I read her life story when I was elementary school. Therefore, I want to learn more about her. Also, people say that Helen was triple handicap. However, she overcome hardship. Therefore, I want to know about why her overcome the hardship. I think many people know about Helen Kelker but some people don't know about her life. I will write about Helen Keller. Helen Keller was born in 1880 June 27th in Alabama. She was a peace activist. She suffered meningitis when she was a year and nine months. From this disease she lose her hearing, eyesight and she cannot speak. From these things she cannot be received manners, so she was selfish. Her parents requested home tutor. Bell introduced Sullivan. The encounter changed Hellen's life. Ms.Sullivan told finger letter word manner. Also, she can speak. Famous episode was Sullivan poured water in Hellen's hands while Ms.Sullivan spelled water many times. Helen can realized all things have name. After three months she can write letters, and she can read books in Braille. After these things, Helen had contributed to the society. She encouraged many people although she was triple handicap. Also, she had been to Japan three times. The above is an short explanation of Helen Keller. I want to learn more about Helen Keller through this Independent writing project.
December 10, 2017
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This content violates our Community Guidelines.September 24, 2017
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What kind of government does the U.S have? What kind of government does the U.S have?
September 21, 2017
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The Seminar Camp in Miyagi The Seminar Camp in Miyagi I went to Miyagi from September 7th to 9th for the seminar camp. I visited Sendai and Ishinomaki, Onagawa. I learn a lot of important things at there. It was a precious experience for me. Especially, I want to write a thing of my impression. I visited many places in Miyagi. I remember the most of all is Ishinomaki in second day and final day, because I enjoyed the beautiful scenery, and local dish at there. I ate sliced raw ascidian for the first time. It was delicious. However, not only enjoyed them. I actually learn local people’s thoughts, and the necessity of disaster preparedness. I climbed the mountain which used for evacuate then. It was hard for me to climb it. However, elementary school student actually climbed it in heavy snow. They must be scary. Especially, the bereaved, disaster victim’s speech moved me. They told us people should make each day count. Also, they told us people need to understand landform of they live. In conclusion, I learned a lot of things in the seminar camp. I actually look, and hear them. It can deepen my understanding of disaster area. Also, I can understand the history, and culture in there. Therefore, I want to make use of this experience to study in the class. Also, I want to appreciate a common day like today. I want to visit here again. I am sorry for my poor English, please correct these sentences.
September 11, 2017
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The Aging Population with a Declining Birthrate Issue in Japan2 Next, I want to explain “Why the aging population with a declining birthrate issue have happened in Japan? Therefore, I want to show the problems with the aging population with a declining birthrate.” To begin I explain why the aging population with a declining birthrate issue have happened in Japan. It has two reason. First, death of rate is fall, and the average lifespan improved. According to the Japanese government (2016), “In Japan, living environment, and nutritional condition have improved.” Therefore, “medical technology progress and so on. From these things, babies and infants, young person of death rate are greatly fall.” From these things, we can know people’s life time is increasing. Second, declining birth rate cause decline in young population. According to Japanese government (2014) “The number of births are declining tend after first baby boom, and second baby boom.” From these things, Japan’s declining birth rate is serious.The issue is difficult to solve, because the issue has many causes.
July 9, 2017
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The Aging Population with a Declining Birthrate Issue in Japan Have you ever thought about “the aging population with a declining birthrate? “The ratio of 65 and over has raised, for the first time it exceeded 27 percent.” (Japanese government, 2016) I want to show three main points. First, I will write about “What is the aging population with a declining birthrate? Therefore, show the population by age groups.” Next, I will write about “Why the aging population with a declining birthrate issue have happened in Japan?” Last, I want to write about “What is the solution to solve the issue?” I want to explain three main points. First, I want to explain, what is the aging population with a declining birthrate issue, and the current situation. Begin with, the aging population with a declining birthrate means that elderly people are increasing, and children are decreasing. Next, I want to show the population by age groups. According to the Japanese government (2016), “population of children under 15 years of age are 1578, 0000 people. It is decline 16, 5000 people”. “The ratio is 12.4 percent, so it is lowest level.” From these means declining birth rate. In addition, according to the Japanese government (2016), “population of 65 years old and over are 3459, 1000 people, It is increase 72, 3000 people compared with the previous”. “Therefore, the ratio of 65 years old and over is 27.3 percent. It reached a record high in 2016.” Besides, “population of 75 years old and over is 1690, 8000 people, it is increase 58, 6000 people, and it continue to be more than population of population under 15 years of age last year.” From these things the population of elderly people is increase. These imply Japan is super aging society.
July 9, 2017
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July 5, 2017 It was sunny and cloudy yesterday. The heavy rain in observation history in Kyushu region. Buildings and roads were damaged. By the way I went to school. Yesterday's English class is speaking. I learned religious issues of clothing. I can understand disagree opinion but people should respect them culture. I think that people should not only contradict but also people should respect others opinion.
July 6, 2017
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June 24, 2017 It was sunny yesterday, but I did not go out. I studied Economic, English and Chinese. Yesterday was very busy day. I was very tired, so I went to bed early last night. I would like to write why I study these subjects. First, I study Englsh for TOEIC test ,and English class. My English class's teacher gives students a lot of homework. I sometimes spend a whole day finishing my homework! In addition, she is a hard marker, so I can learn many things from her. I appreciate of her. Second, I study Chinese for passing HSK Grade six. I can speak Chinese but I am not good at writting. It's because, maybe I don't use simplified Chinese character, so I cannot remenber it. My mother's native language is Chinese, so she teaches me Chinese difficult pronunciation, and difficult Chinese character. All my familly can speak Chinese, so I speak Chinese with my parents, and grand parents. While, I always talk in Japanese with my sibling at home. Third, I study economic for term examination. I think microeconomics is difficult to understand. Everyday is busy mow, but Summer vacation is coming up soon:)
June 24, 2017
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Burdock is Black but It is Not Dirty I impressed three parts from the article “Book is behind bullying of mixed-race children” when I read it. I will write my impression three parts. First, “The burdock is black and dirty because he did not wash his body properly; the daikon is white and beautiful because he did.” I impressed this part which is portrayed in “Ninjin-san ga Akai Wake”. It is because I surprised people can realize this is absurd but it is popular book. I think burdock is originally black so burdock is not dirty. Saying likely this, many children may think having dark skin is dirty. Second, “I hate my light brown skin, I hate the burdock, I’m dirty and I want to be like the white radish!” I impressed this part where little boy said it Because, I think it is painful for him to sensitive about his skin. I can understand from this passage, some people still have a prejudice to black. Third, “Yes, we are all clean, and they all sing and dance together. Black is beautiful, white is beautiful, red is beautiful-all the color in the world are equally beautiful!” I impressed this part which writes on this article because I think this idea is good. In the future, many foreigner come to Japan so children should understand this idea. People tend to judge others appearances but this passage shows color of skin is not concern. I write most impression three part of the article. The burdock is not dirty, so children should not think black skin is dirty, and they should respect each other of different skin colors.
June 3, 2017
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