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I just wanted to add that these days native English speakers often avoid using the word "handicapped."
I believe the preferred term is "disabled" or, in noun form, a "disability."
Helen Keller
I choose Helen Keller for Independent Writing Project because I read her life story when I was elementary school.*when I was in elementary school*
Therefore, I want to learn more about her.
Also, people say that Helen was triple handicap.
*handicapped*
However, she overcome hardship.
*overcame* a suggestion would also be to put "this" after overcame
Therefore, I want to know about why her overcome the hardship.
*how she overcame*
I think many people know about Helen Kelker but some people don't know about her life.
*Keller*
I will write about Helen Keller.
*I will be writing*
Helen Keller was born in 1880 June 27th in Alabama.
She was a peace activist.
She suffered meningitis when she was a year and nine months.
*add old to the end of the sentence*
From this disease she lose her hearing, eyesight and she cannot speak.
*lost* *could not*
From these things she cannot be received manners, so she was selfish.
*Because of these things she did not learn about manners*
Her parents requested home tutor.
*requested a home tutor*
Bell introduced Sullivan.
*Who are Bell and Sullivan?*
The encounter changed Helen's life.
Ms.Sullivan told finger letter word manner.
*needs revising*
Also, she can speak.
*could then*
Famous episode was Sullivan poured water in Helen's hands while Ms.Sullivan spelled water many times.
*a famous moment was when Sullivan*
Helen can realized all things have name.
*Helen then realized all things have a name.*
After three months she can write letters, and she can read books in Braille.
*could write letters, and read books in braille.*
After these things, Helen had contributed to the society.
*had then*
She encouraged many people although she was triple handicap.
*handicapped*
Also, she had been to Japan three times.
The above is an short explanation of Helen Keller.
I want to learn more about Helen Keller through this Independent writing project.
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