Could you please help me correct these sentences? There are some spelling mistakes in the advertisement, including the English name. Please send us the original order number which should have been in your letter dated October 22nd. I led a team organising the Dormitory Design Competition and deciding on awards through discussions. I’m outgoing, honest and sincere; I’m positive, innovative and persistent, always striving to be better; I have a strong organizational capability and team spirit.

Could you please help correct these sentences? 1.My parents have retired now; my elder brother has worked for three years since he graduated from a military academy, and my younger brother now work in Shen Zhen. 2. “Culture tourism, safety first” is not a sentence and there’s a spelling mistake in it. 3.I worked as a guide and interpreter for a foreign team at the conference. 4.Your letter dated October 22 didn’t show us the necessary original order number.

Could you please help me correct these sentences? 1.We hope that you will be interested in our stainless steel cookware (set). 2.You can enjoy/have a 2 percent discount on the price if you place an order of 500 or more microwave ovens. 3.On a purchase in quantities of not less than 500 of microwave ovens, we will allow you a discount of 2 percent. 4.Our nightclothes are well accepted for their modern design, beautiful colors and high quality. I'd appreciate it if you could help me with these sentences.

Should College Students Hire Cleaners? Recently, the issue of college students hiring cleaners has aroused public concern. Some people think it’s a good way to save time for studying, while others object that it’s a bad habit for the students. As far as I’m concerned, college students shouldn’t hire cleaners in their dormitories. There exists some insecurities when college students hire cleaners. For example, there would be a risk of theft, for some cleaners’ personal qualities can’t be guaranteed. Besides, since the cleaners can enter the dorm, there exists the possibility that bad guys would sneak into the dormitories by disguising themselves as cleaners. Hiring cleaners in dorms may not only cause insecurities, but also makes college students form bad habits. The most direct influence is that students don’t have to clean the dorms on their own, and it may make them form the habit of laziness. Besides, with a though that someone else would clean the rooms, the students would be more dependent on others. Moreover, most students still live on their parents’ money, and it’s a kind of wastefulness to spend money that way while they can clean themselves. To sum up, there are many bad effects for college students to hire cleaners. Students shouldn’t just follow suit without thinking about it carefully. I'd appreciate it if you could help me with corrections and comments. :)

Could you please help me correct these two paragraphs? ^_^ We students all study hard. We study on weekdays from morning to night. In class, we sometimes simulate tough negotiations or act as interpreters, which is more challenging. After class, we have to do a lot of homework. Maybe some of us will study abroad after graduating, but I believe we are friends all the time. My English is not as good as others, so I must study harder. In my spare time, I usually practice my English by speaking and listening again and again. More importantly, I’m more confident by learning English, which is a priceless asset in my life.

Could you please help me correct these sentences? My classmate Mike told me that he saw my boyfriend leave the university with a girl. Then he invited me to watch a movie with him and I accepted. On our way to the cinema theater, I ran across my boyfriend who were handing out the leaflets with my classmates to passersby. I did not know the fact until then. Mike’s words caused misunderstanding between my boyfriend and me.