Could you please help me correct these two paragraphs? ^_^
We students all study hard. We study on weekdays from morning to night. In class, we sometimes simulate tough negotiations or act as interpreters, which is more challenging. After class, we have to do a lot of homework. Maybe some of us will study abroad after graduating, but I believe we are friends all the time.

My English is not as good as others, so I must study harder. In my spare time, I usually practice my English by speaking and listening again and again. More importantly, I’m more confident by learning English, which is a priceless asset in my life.

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Could you please help me correct these two paragraphs? ^_^
We students all study hard. We study on weekdays from morning to night. In class, we sometimes simulate tough negotiations or act as interpreters, which is more challenging. After class, we have to do a lot of homework. Maybe some of us will study abroad after graduating, but I believe we are friends all the time.

My English is not as good as others, so I must study harder. In my spare time, I usually practice my English by speaking and listening again and again. More importantly, I’m more confident by learning English, which is a priceless asset in my life.

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This is fine - did you mean at the end of the first para that you believe that you will continue to be friends even if some move abroad after graduating?  If so a more natural way to express it is "..I believe we will always be friends".  
Good job.

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There is nothing incorrect here. Great job!

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