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Please correct my mistakes
As i always say, The Deer Abby stories have been my inspiration and you can say that I am kind of addicted to them .
The story for today is about a mother who has given up on life . she stated the following " I have had cancer for 12 years. This will be my last year" . It is sad that she has to suffer from cancer and the long, painful ,devastating treatment . I know that she must have been mentally exhausted . But in my opinion she should never give up on life . People only have one chance of life and they should live it to its fullest . Who knows she might wake up tomorrow and finds herself completely healed up . I find her to be a selfish mother because she wants her daughter who is about to get marry to support her idea and accept her death
There is no kids in their right mind will accept the idea of their parents death . people only deal with it after it happens . No one will wish for it . I am not denying her the right to think about death . all sick people think of death all the time (in my opinion ) . But she should hold on to life and think in a postive way specially that there is a big event coming soon , which is her daughter wedding . I am not trying to be the judge here. she must've been through hell to start making her death plans
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Please correct my mistake
I was reading the Dear Abby letters . I always read it. It gives me an insight into the culture , and the problems of other people. I was astonished with the big difference in culture and custom of the person who wrote the letter .
She was a Mom who had just become a Grandmother for the first time , and she was asking whether it is okey for her to visit her daughter , or should she just wait for the daughter to invites her .
It is just so weird to me because in my culture the mother always have the right to show up in her daughter' house anytime and it wont be a Problem .
And when the mother become a Grandmother for the first time she will be the second person to see the baby even befor his father get the chance to see him (because fathers are not allowed inside the labour room) . Then the new born baby and his mother spend two to three weeks in the grandmother' house .
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Small trip (please correct any mistake)
The trip to The Borje was upsetting a littel bit and tiring
The first bad thing that happened to me was that I couldn't find a comfortable place to sit inside the car, I was forced to sit at the back of the jeep where we put the luggage usually . As if this wasnt bad enough the air conditioner started dropping water at me . By the time we reached The Borje i was socking wet . After that i struggled with the hot weather it was 41c it was so hot and i didnt want to get out of the car because there was noway sitting on the grass would by any fun .
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The advice of a dying father please correct any mistake
This is a story that i translated from arabic
A man was dying , so he called out for his son . The man said dear son your father is dying as you can see . Dear son i have lived a full life till i reached to a point where i start hating life . Son , I am going to give you some advice , said the father. If you used them people around you are going to love and cherish you . First be humble to people and they will respect you , second use your knowledge in helping them and they will follow you . Third show compassion to their little one and their adult will love you
And finally give the people around you as much as you have but dont expect any thing in-return .
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Yesterday Please correct my mistakes
Yesterday one of my neighbors were supposed to come over , but they had have to cancel because their son was in an accident . The 15 years old boy is now in coma and with no hope of waking up again. He had his skull broken and his arm and leg . He is in very bad shap . I really don't want him to die . He was a nosy one , but i feel for his family. I bet that they are crying nonstop . The news was upsetting . I can only hope for him to get better .
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Dear Abby ... Please correct any mistake
I was reading the Dear Abby letters the other day and i was amused with the problem presented . And i was more in shock with the respond she gave to the woman . The girl has a boyfriend but she wants to live life up as she said .the Dear Abby told her to go and tell her boyfriend and if he is like 99 % of the men in the planet he would be ok with her to go and be with other it is just weird for me it may be a cultural thing but i dont belive that there is a man who would be happy if his lady is out with other men
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