Yesterday Please correct my mistakes
Yesterday one of my neighbors were supposed to come over , but they had have to cancel because their son was in an accident . The 15 years old boy is now in coma and with no hope of waking up again. He had his skull broken and his arm and leg . He is in very bad shap . I really don't want him to die . He was a nosy one , but i feel for his family. I bet that they are crying nonstop . The news was upsetting . I can only hope for him to get better .
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Yesterday (Please correct my mistakes)
Yesterday one of my neighbors was were supposed to come ove , but they had have to cancel because their son was in an accident. The 15 years old boy is now in a coma and with no hope of waking up again. He had his skull fractured broken and in addition to his arm and leg . He is in very bad shape. I really don't want him to die. He was a nosy one, but I feel for (you can say 'feel for' which is very colloquial or you could say 'empathize with' if you want to use slightly more formal English) his family. I bet that they are crying nonstop. The news was upsetting. I can only hope for him to get better .Want to progress faster?
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