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Can you correct this cover letter for me Please Dear Cover letter for application to join the PhD programme at Istanbul Aydin University. I am writing to you to showcase my interest in continuing my academic study through the PhD programme in Business Management at Istanbul Aydin University. I studied at ESC Business School in Algeria. My Master’s degree was in Corporate Finance, I had the chance to be in Business School where I got varied knowledge about management, marketing, Finance and leadership. During this time I’ve developed a strong interest in entrepreneurship. I’ve been able to put my theoretical knowledge into practice even as a student when I launched my first startup called YallaCours, it was a website for learning languages online. I was so passionate about this business but my lack of experience and the Algerian delay in adopting online payment system has affected my startup so I closed it. My desire to discover new experiences brought me here to Turkey. I worked for 4 months in the marketing department of a Turkish company, I had a good experience but my passion about leadership led me to quit my job and start my online business through my Youtube Channel where I share tips and knowledge about entrepreneurship and business. Today I have more than 43k subscribers in my channel, I believe that it is a big responsibility and a good opportunity to develop my online business. I wish to continue my academic career by completing my doctorate, which has always been a long-term ambition of mine. I plan to do research in the field of online business and I cannot imagine a better place to study this than Istanbul Aydin University. With my knowledge of the topic of small business and my own experience with online business, I am confident that I can complete the research project which I have proposed to a high standard. After completing the PhD, I plan to work as an consultant for online business, or to teach this topic at the university. I am an ambitious person. I work hard to achieve my goals and have unique experiences. I believe that with my knowledge and experience in this important field, I can contribute to both the Istanbul Aydin University and to the wider discipline of entrepreneurship. I would like to draw your attention back to my CV which is enclosed with this letter, which will demonstrate my professional and academic history. I look forward to hearing from you.
August 14, 2020
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This content violates our Community Guidelines.August 13, 2020
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Part of Cover letter Hey please correct for me that: it will be for academic purpose: Hello, I am Nour, a young women who dreams of change and leadership. I graduated from Business School in Algeria where I got a lot of knowledge about management, marketing, finance and so on. I don't like wasting time that's why during my studies I launched a startup called YallaCours, it was a website for learning languages online. I was so passionate about this business but my lack of experience and the Algerian delay in adopting online payment system has affected my startup so I closed it. My desire to discover new experiences brought me here to Turkey. I currently work in the marketing department of a Turkish company, I am having a good experience but I want to start my own business. I would like to learn more and to create an effective network through your program, I assume that MBA is the best degree for me right now. I hope that will improve my skills to launch another start-up. I am developing a social community using Instagram and my Youtube channel helping people to adopt Eco-friendly habits. Because I really want to invest in Eco-friendly technology and organic products.
January 23, 2020
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Academic IELTS exam Task 1 The graph shows the number of admissions in four different categories of entertainment in 2009. The table gives information about prices for admission in sports, theme parks and cinema, with a further classification by number of tickets. It’s clear from the graph that the greatest number of people preferred to go to the cinema, reaching about 1050 thousands admissions. This was followed by theme parks, about 400 thousands of the population spent their free time in Theme parks. Attending sport games was the last entertainment chosen by the population in 2009. Turning to the table, we can notice that buying a family ticket for four people is a great deal compared to the price of one individual ticket times four. The most expensive ticket was for Football game- AFL which costs 75 dollars for one ticket, however, it was 0,5 dollar less for one person with a Family ticket. Overall, the ticket for the cinema was much cheaper than the other activities and almost sport games were the most expensive.
May 26, 2019
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Academic IELTS exam Task 2 In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? ________________________________________ These days, the rate of non-employment is increasing day after day, and that is in many countries either developed or non-developed ones. In my opinion, this subject is a bone of contention because it affects the financial capacity of people and creates problems into the family and the society in general. First, I think that the new technology is one of the main factors that cause this situation. In other words, today robots have replaced human in companies because the machines are faster and more efficient than man who could complain or get tired. That’s why a lot of entrepreneurs prefer create a business where everything is digitalised so they don’t need to hire people. Moreover, the world was suffering recently from economic crises that touched many countries such as Spain and Greece. In consequence, a big proportion of the population lost their job. In this kind of critical situation, if someone lose his/her work, it will be hard to find another one easily even if you have a great educational degree because everyone is looking for a job. Finally, the development of education in the last century has helped a large number of people around the world to have access to courses from prestigious universities in UK or USA. That’s why more and more people are highly graduated, however, the job market is unable to satisfy the across demand for job today. To conclude, I would say that it is the responsibility of the government to offer more work opportunities for people by incite them to create their own business and contribute in the development of the economy.
May 26, 2019
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IELTS Academic exam Hello, I'm preparing for the IELTS exam, and the writing part is the most difficult for me so I'm trying to practice using exam's samples. Please I need a help to correct my essay. Thank you. -------------------------------------- The first bar chart shows the percentage of computer ownership from 2002 and 2010. The second graph provides information about computer ownership by education level in 2002 and 2010. We can see in the first graph that people are buying more and more computers. In other words, about 65% of all people interviewed had a computer in 2002. This number increased gently 60% in 2006 then to 70% in 2010. Turning to the second graph, we can notice that postgraduate persons had the highest percentage in owning computers, at 90% in 2010 and 85% in 2002. While the percentage of computer ownership rose steadily from the lowest level of education to the highest one in 2002, this number grew faster in 2010. Overall, the percentage of computer ownership rose when the level of education is higher in both years, 2002 and 2010. By the same logic, this number grew from 2002 and 2010.
May 24, 2019
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Preparation for my IELTS Academic writing Hello, I'm preparing for the IELTS exam, and the writing part is the most difficult for me so I'm trying to practice using exam's samples. Please I need a help to correct my essay. Thank you. -------------------------------------------- Question: The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. ---------------------------------------- The chart shows boys’ and girls’ common sports played in New Zealand. Overall, almost equal quantities of both sexes participated in Tennis and Basketball. However, considerably number of girls preferred Netball, while boys enjoyed soccer. According to the graph, we can notice that quarter of girls played Netball (25%). Swimming comes in the second position with 22% of participation, followed by tennis and Basketball, which are exercised by 7% and 6% respectively. Soccer and Athletics are less preferred by female children, chosen by 5% and 4% respectively. Finally, Marital Arts (2%) and Cricket represent the least popular activities among girls. Turning to boys’ preferences, we can observe that the top activity for boys Is playing soccer (24%). Like female children, swimming takes the second position but with a smaller percentage, by 14% of participation rate. In contrast of the girls’ preferences, Cricket Is chosen by a tenth of all boys. Marital arts, Tennis and basketball are less popular among boys. Then Netball comes in the last position. A significant percentage of boys and girls enjoyed sports not given in the chart.
May 17, 2019
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Preparation for my IELTS Academic writing Hello, I'm preparing for the IELTS exam, and the writing part is the most difficult for me so I'm trying to practice using exam's samples. Please I need a help to correct my essay. Thank you. ----------------------------------------- Question: " The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience." --------------------------------------------------------- My essay : By all the odds, the car is one of the revolutionary inventions in the last century. While some people believe that the daily use of car make their life much easier and it becomes essential, others make the environmental concerns before their self-interest. In my opinion, the introduction of international laws to control car ownership and use will be beneficial for us and for our planet. Firstly, I think that cars consume a lot of energy from their manufacture to their use. That Is to say, if we save this energy for the future instead of producing a huge number of cars every year, we will protect our natural resources because we all know that the earth’s resources of oil, gas and some metals are reducing and they may disappear soon. Moreover, reducing the use of cars may reduce carbon in the air and diminish pollution as well. That’s why, I believe that 29 million vehicles in British roads damage the quality of the air for the citizens. For example, today the British government encourage people to buy electric cars by reducing taxes and helping them financially to decrease the traditional cars in the roads due to the pollution they make. Finally, in my view, using other forms of transport as bicycles or public transports such as buses, metro and trains decrease the traffic jam in roads in particular in big cities. Taking everything into consideration, I would say that the control of cars ownership and use by the government is an advantageous idea to provide a healthier life for people and for the planet as well.
May 13, 2019
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Please correct my description and improve it to make it more attractive Hello, I want to participante in a competition and I need to persuade them of my idea, please correct my description and improve it to make it more attractive. Easy Move My idea is about a mobile application of public transport reinvented to facilitate your daily journeys. This app will provide informations about bus, metro, tram and train stations with schedule and prices. In addition to student transport program "Cous" with all stations and destinations. We want through this app to make the move in the city of Algiers easy for tourists as for citizens.
March 10, 2017
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Can you correct me please I think that the there are some qualities that make a great leader. First, the leader has to know his strengths and his weaknesses for exemple by using a Johari window which Is a model for mapping personality awareness. Secondly, the leader has a clear vision of the future. Thirdly, the leader has an emotional intelligence, he is not dominated and overwhelmed by his emotions but he exploits them in an intelligent way. In addition, he influences others and lastly, the leader Is dedicated to serving others. Personally, the leader that living today whom I admire is Nidhal Guessoum who Is an Algerian astrophysicist, He is a professor at the American University of Sharjah, United Arab Emirates and he spent two years as a post-doctoral researcher at NASA’s Goddard Space Flight Center, and he has recently become a prime scholar on the relations between Islam and modern science. I think that he Is an effective leader because he contributes to the sharing of scientific culture in society and guides people.
December 18, 2016
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