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Online shopping
Hi, good afternoon! I copy here a writing I did for english class in this morning so that you can correct my mistakes. Thanks! :)
"The goal of this report is to evaluate the different options people have to be able to buy products in the easiest and effective way for them. It's possible to go to a shop directly, but since some years ago after being created the Internet, people can online shopping too. In fact, they do it massively there. It's a faster way, no doubt about that, but is it better?
Online shopping is by far the faster and comfortable way to buy some kinds of products. You can see photos and the whole description of the product on the seller's website and they can even take you the product home. That sounds so interesting! To be able to buy a product with just some "clicks" is a revolution, specially useful for specialised products and technological devices you couldn't find near home.
As disadvantages, the main one would be how to give back a defective product because you don't know the seller and the process could be too long. In addition to this, as for clothes, how could you buy some clothes if you haven't tried them before? It's highly likely clothes don't fit proper! For alimentation products is desirable to check the expiry date before buying something.
In short, nothing is perfect and the best option could be to combine this 2 different ways to buy products according to your needs depending on the kind of product, not focusing just on one of them. It's sometimes better to take your time before buying, otherwise you could waste your money."
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Rédaction
Bonsoir, je veux vous monter la rédaction que j'ai fait pour mon examen de français du premier cours du niveau B1 afin que vous pouviez corrigier mes fautes, s'il vous plaît :) Il est un message sur un blog en Internet. Vraiment, j'ai dejà corrigé quelque fautes que j'ai constaté après finir l'examen. Je peux améliorer mais j'espère reussir :D Merci à l'avance!
"Bonjour mes camarades,
Je vais parler de mon expérience l'année dernière dans une université française. Il faut que vous alliez dans un pays étranger si vous voulez apprendre une nouvel langue. C'est la meilleur façon.
D'abord, je suis arrivé a Nantes au début du mois de septembre et je ne connaissais personne. J'étais un petit peu triste parce que je manquais ma famille, mais quand j'ai commençé aller en cours j'ai connu beaucoup de personnes très sympatiques. J'ai fait des amis très rapidement. Il est très facile faires des amis pour faire la fête à condition que tu sois une personne ouverte.
Cependant, il fait plus froid qu'en Espagne. Enplus, il a neigé presque toutes les semaines. Je ne support pas qu'il fasse autant de froid. Il est aussi dificile que vous compreniez bien le français si vous ne suis jamais allé en France. Selon moi, ils parlent très vite.
Je ne regrette pas du tout avoir eu l'opportunité d'aller en France pendant une année parce que j'ai appris beaucoup de franáis et j'ai fait des amis. Je recommende que vous étudiiez en France. Á bientôt!
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Music
Hi! How are you? I have a querie for you :)
What option is correct?
1- Why should it be considered download music as a crime?
2- Why should it be considered to download music as a crime?
I hope there are no more mistakes in the sentence. Thank you!
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Rédaction
Bonjour, il est la première fois que j'écris sur ce site en français. J'ai toujours écrit en anglais, mais j'étudie aussi le français et je veux l'améliorer. C'est pour cela que je vais vous montrer ce rédaction que j'ai fait hier pour un examen d'expression écrite à fin que vous pouviez corriger mes fautes.
"Bonjour monsieur,
Je vous écris parce que j'ai acheté des produits en ligne sur votre site et ils ne sont pas ce que j'avais mis dans le panier.
J'ai acheté des lunettes de soleil, un costume et des chaussures noires et vous m'avez envoyé un t-shirt, des baskets, et la seule chose que vous avez bien envoyé, des lunettes de soleil.
Je pense qui'il s'agit d'un erreur. Ils est possible que vous vous soyez trompé de commande. Comme vous pouvez voir, le prix de ma commande était très superior de ce que vous m'avez envoyé. Vous devrez le vérifier, s'il vous plaît.
Je voudrais que vous me remboursiez l'argent parce que j'ai tout payé à l'avance par carte bleue ou que vous me changiez le t-shirt et les baskets par ce que je vous ai vraiment demandé.
En attendant de votre réponse et une solution rapidement.
Bien cordialment."
J'ai corrigé avant quelques erreurs que j'ai constaté avant d'écrire mon message. Merci par avance!!
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Working abroad
Hi! How are you?
It's been such a long time since the last time i accessed to this website and I'd like showing you my last writing of english class so that you can correct my mistakes. Thank you!
Nowadays, because of the major crisis we're living in Europe, plenty of people have to motve to another country to get a job and to be able to survive.
That happens in Spain as well, some people leave the country to contrive a new life far away from their families because the can't get a job or is underpaid. On the another hand, some people decide going to work abroad for pleasure.
The way I see it, working abroad has some advantages and disadvantages. It depends on the personal situation of the person who decides to go abroad. In the beginning, It can be hard to survive if you aren't staying there for pleasure, you don't understand the language and in addition to this, you miss your family and your friends.
However, I this there are some advantages. You can learn a new language which can be useful when you decide come back home. Furthermore, you can meet new people and find out new mentalities and ways of thinking. That's interesting!
To sump up, you have to suit the new situation altough can be hard and the weather isn't as good as in Spain.
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Working abroad 2
I continue as I told previously :9
However, I this there are some advantages. You can learn a new language which can be useful when you decide come back home. Furthermore, you can meet new people and find out new mentalities and ways of thinking. That's interesting!
To sump up, you have to suit the new situation altough can be hard and the weather isn't as good as in Spain.
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Working abroad
Hi! How are you?
It's been such a long time since the last time i accessed to this website and I'd like showing you my last writing of english class so that you can correct my mistakes. Thank you!
Nowadays, because of the major crisis we're living in Europe, plenty of people have to motve to another country to get a job and to be able to survive.
That happens in Spain as well, some people leave the country to contrive a new life far away from their families because the can't get a job or is underpaid. On the another hand, some people decide going to work abroad for pleasure.
The way I see it, working abroad has some advantages and disadvantages. It depends on the personal situation of the person who decides to go abroad. In the beginning, It can be hard to survive if you aren't staying there for pleasure, you don't understand the language and in addition to this, you miss your family and your friends.
I continue on another post...
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Weird Story
Hi! How are you? It has been such a long time since last time I wrote here :) I'll copy a text I wrote as a writting for english class. The teacher hasn't brought us back yet this text, so I would like you correct my mistakes. Thank you very much! The text is about a weird situation I lived.
"This weird story happened to me some years ago on the beach at midnight in the end of May. The weather was really good that night, so a friend and I decided to go there to have fun, talk and relax.
Nobody else was there and we went for a walk near the river mouth. From the last building of the beach to arrive there, there are 500 meters of distance more or less. Obviously, everything was dark.
When we were walking, we heard a dog barking near us and we saw as well a shade which looked like a big dog or something like that, running towards us in front of us, so we got scared and I took her hand suddenly to start to run on the sand on the contrary direction to leave the beach the faster, the better, like in a film. I had never been so scared!
Finally, we got to leave the beach without seeing behind. When we arrived to the seafront, we saw and heard nothing. Nowadays, I still wonder if that shadow was a dog or a ghost, but We saw and heard the same :D"
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Italki
Hi again! This time, I'm going to write about this website. I have been using it only for a week and I think It's very interesting. We can learn a lot of English on Italki. I should write more texts but I prefer correcting writings of the rest of the users. I enjoy it :D
Moreover, I don't know what write, so I prefer reading. I've written twice before but I always talk about English language and I don't want to be a bored person :D As I said previously, I like correcting texts because It's very fun for me, mainly of Spanish people like me, because I understand better their writings and I think I can help them a lot, although there is a little problem. I'm not a native person and I'm learning English, so I can make any mistakes correcting. I hope you forgive me in those cases :D
However, I prefer correcting Spanish people rather than native people because I think I'm more useful for them and moreover, It's easier for me to realise and recognize their mistakes. A lot of times, those were my mistakes before :)
I'd would like to talk to native people here. I could learn a lot and even I'd also like to meet new native English people who live here or near Valencia right now (or Valencian people who want to improve their English) to practice together face to face or in a written way here or on Skype, but I have no webcam at this moment haha :D
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Practice English :)
Hi guys! How are you?
I have a little question for all of you. I'd like to improve my English, so I think the best way is to speak with native people, but I prefer face to face. I think it would be more fun do it with native speakers than with spanish people.
I go to an languages exchanges every week on Monday, but everybody is Spanish people there. I live in a big town (or little city, as you prefer) which has an beach area, so I hope a lot of foreign people are coming to those exchanges this summer, but I'm not sure. In addition to this, I'd like to meet new cultures and ways to see life. It would be very interesting for me!
As I said previously, I'd like to meet new foreign people and make new foreign friends, but I don't know how to do that right now. I remember happily when I lived in Italy for 5 months and I met plenty of people. I learnt a lot of things and it went very fun for me.
Do you know another way to meet foreign people face to face to practise English?
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