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Working abroad Hi! How are you? It's been such a long time since the last time i accessed to this website and I'd like showing you my last writing of english class so that you can correct my mistakes. Thank you! Nowadays, because of the major crisis we're living in Europe, plenty of people have to motve to another country to get a job and to be able to survive. That happens in Spain as well, some people leave the country to contrive a new life far away from their families because the can't get a job or is underpaid. On the another hand, some people decide going to work abroad for pleasure. The way I see it, working abroad has some advantages and disadvantages. It depends on the personal situation of the person who decides to go abroad. In the beginning, It can be hard to survive if you aren't staying there for pleasure, you don't understand the language and in addition to this, you miss your family and your friends. However, I this there are some advantages. You can learn a new language which can be useful when you decide come back home. Furthermore, you can meet new people and find out new mentalities and ways of thinking. That's interesting! To sump up, you have to suit the new situation altough can be hard and the weather isn't as good as in Spain.

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Working abroad

Hi! How are you?

It's been such a long time since the last time I accessed to this website and I'd like to showing you my last essay writing of from my English class so that you can correct my mistakes. Thank you!

Nowadays, because of the major crisis we're living through in Europe, plenty of people have had to motve to another countries to get a job and to be able to survive.

That happens in Spain as well. Some people leave the country to start contrive a new life far away from their families because they can't get a job or is are underpaid. On the another hand, some people decide going to work abroad for pleasure.

The way I see it, working abroad has some advantages and disadvantages. It depends on the personal situation of the person who decides to go abroad. In the beginning/At first, it can be hard to survive if you aren't staying there for pleasure, you don't understand the language and in addition to this, you miss your family and your friends.

However, I this there are some advantages. You can learn a new language which can be useful when you decide to come back home. Furthermore, you can meet new people and learn about/experience find out new mentalities and ways of thinking. That's interesting!

To sump up, you have to adjust to suit the new situation altough it can be hard and the weather isn't as good as in Spain.

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I hope this helps.:) I put emphasis on mistakes that might confuse a native speaker and giving you better vocabulary choices.


Working abroad

Hi! How are you?

It's been such a long time since I the last time i accessed to this website and I'd like TO showing you my last writing of FOR  English class so that you can correct my mistakes. Thank you!

Nowadays, because of the major crisis we're living THROUGH/WE ARE EXPERIENCING in Europe, plenty of people have to move to another country to get a job and to be able to survive.

That happens in Spain as well, some people leave the country to (contrive) BUILD (just sounds more natural) a new life far away from their families because theY can't get a job or is ARE underpaid. On the another hand, some people decide TO going to work abroad for pleasure.

The way I see it, working abroad has some advantages and disadvantages. It depends on the personal situation of the person INDIVIDUAL who decides to go abroad. In AT the beginning it can be hard to survive if you aren't staying there for pleasure, you don't understand the language and in addition to this, you miss your family and your friends.

However, I (this) THINK? there are some advantages. You can learn a new language, which can be useful when you decide TO come back home. Furthermore, you can meet new people and find out GET TO KNOW/EXPERIENCE new mentalities and ways of thinking. That's interesting!

To sump IT up, you have to suit ADEPT TO the new situation although IT can be hard and the weather isn't as good as in Spain.
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