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False alarm If anyone can help me correct my writing I would appreciate your help. False alarm This morning I arrived at my office and turned on the computer as usual, when I was preparing to start my work, I suddenly found the folder contained all my works of 8 years disappeared. Oh my good, I felt my mind blank but I tried to calm down and recalled what happened, it may be deleted by virus I thought, then I tried to figure out how to get my works back, if it really lost it would be a disaster for me. Fortunately I found it in another folder, I thought maybe I moved it to this folder by accident. It was a false alarm but I drew a lesson from this. I copied all my works into another hard disk in case this really happened.
January 28, 2015
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Movie review AI Movie review AI Last night I saw a movie at home, the name of the movie is Artificial Intelligence.It's a science fiction movie ,published in 2001,directed by a very famous American director. In this movie,with the development of technology, scientists have ability to creat a robot which has feeling,can think,can learn and can even form its own ideas. In scientific community it was a disputed topic about giving robot emotion. The scientists created a young boy for a family whose child was suffering an unknown disease and froze in the hospital for waiting the treatment. The mother was suffering from the pain of losing their son, so the father who was a scientist created this robot for his wife. At the beginning the wife could not accept this special son, it was a robot ,a toy not my son, but gradually she found that this robot was different,she began to accept it. After a short while, the family's real son recovered and came back, the mother had to face two sons one was her real son one was a robot but she has took it as a half son. Later , the robot found he was not a real boy,he left the home and began a long journey to find out what he is. This movie make us think about the moral problem that the AI bring to human beings ,this is what the director want to tell in his work. A good movie makes people reflect themselves .
December 17, 2014
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Movie review Could you mind help me correct my writing?I would appreciate your help. Thanks alot. Today I want to talk about the movie I saw last week. Interstellar, before we wen to the movies I have seen the previews and comments form others, it had a good reputation and several of my friends also recommended me this movie and told me do not drink too much water, because it last for 3 hours. After watching, I thought it worth the money, it was a science fiction movie, there are a lot of very interesting physical concepts in it such as black hole,worm hole,space travel and time travel.Except the very attractive ideas of exploring the other universes, it also presented the love between the astronaut and his children. Frankly speaking, with the development of technologyI believe our human beings can realize space travel and exploring other planets in the future, because if you look back some science fiction movies in twenty years ago such as ""The terminator" ,you would find some things in these movies that you did not believe before have come true. Have you seen Interstellar? If not it worth to see.
December 16, 2014
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Diary1 If anyone could help me correct my diary I would appreciate it. This Friday I drove back home after class at 8 o'clock, I drove a little bit fast on the elevated road, a car in front of me suddenly stopped and put into reverse, I slowed down my car and changed to another lane in a very short time, I almost crashed his car.what a poor guy, I thought he just missed the exit so he did that, it was very dangerous. When I got home , my friends called me out to have a drink, we went to a small pub,ordered a bottle of whiskey,drunk with live music. All bad things were gone.
December 14, 2014
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self-introduction This is a self-indroduction I translated for my friends, if anyone could help me to check and correct it ,I would appreciate your help. I have been working in XX company for 8 years since I graduated in 2006. In the first four years, I worked as a process engineer and piping design engineer in Chemical Department. In this four years I had learned the whole design procedure including how many specialties should be involved in a project team, the task of each specialty in different stages and the connection between different specialties. Since I was interested in project management and good at technology promotion and well-maintained the relationship between customers and suppliers. I became a project manager in the next four years. During this time I experienced all the management processes including engineering, procurement and construction; All about that let me learn how to successfully manage a project.
December 12, 2014
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