Diary1

If anyone could help me correct my diary I would appreciate it.
This Friday I drove back home after class at 8 o'clock, I drove a little bit fast on the elevated road, a car in front of me  stopped suddenly and reversed, I slowed down  and changed to another lane in a very short time, I almost crashed  into his car.what a poor guy, I thought he just missed the exit so he did that, it was very dangerous.
When I got home , my friends called me out to have a drink, we went to a small pub,ordered a bottle of whiskey, drank and listened to   live music. All the bad things were gone.

Well that was very lucky!

Diary1

If anyone could help me correct my diary, I would appreciate it.
This Friday, I drove back home after my class at 8 o'clock, I drove a little bit faster on the elevated road, then a car in front of me suddenly stopped and reversed, I slowed down and changed to another lane in a very short time quickly, I almost crashed into his car. What a poor guy, I thought he just missed the exit that's why he did that. It was very dangerous.
When I got home, my friends called me out to have a drink. We went to a small pub, ordered a bottle of whiskey, and drank while listening to live music. All the bad things were gone.

Please take note on how conjuctions, punctuation marks, capitalization, and pronouns are used in the sentences.

Good thing nothing bad really happened :)