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Please I need somebody review my writing, it's an example of exam B1 Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about the present situation that affect our neighbourhood actually. Few weeks ago I could show, when I walked with my family that the most of rubbish bins were empty because people left their plastic bag next to it and did't into, it was embarrasing! And there is a unpleasant smell around them, besides the most of plastic bags were break down and all rubbish out of it, so the road was very dirty too. I think is very important a good education about recycling because in some parks I could see youngers who went out and left beer or coke cans, candy wrappers and other things throw away on the ground, it was filthy! It's very important to teach the use of 4R: Recycle, reuse, reduce and repair from their childhood, and that they can use it in they dairy life , so when they will be adults it will be some regular for they. Finally, in my opinion we should teach the high clean-up cost to people who don't recycle and maybe they must pay it, so probably they will be mor consistent with their actions. It would be grateful if you would make something about that I'm looking forward to hearing from you
September 4, 2016
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describing a building (exam B1) Sometimes we don't know the historical value of some buildings that we have near Where I live there is a catle which always have been a toy zone for all children along of the years and we had never think about when it was building, but three years ago this castle was rebuilt and we began to know their history and our too. It was built in 935 by Abderraman III and though don't be totally rebuilt, it can see a double wall into the tower because the first wall was rebuilt in fourteeth century and put a new wall around,so when you into the tower can see two walls, a arabic wall and another christian wall. It is very amaizing! And beside on the third floor it can see arabics pictures in their wall and loopholes which was used to defend the catle during different battles. Finally you can see the original stairs through which you can go till the battlement where you will enjoy of exceptional and marvelous views of landscape.
September 3, 2016
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A restaurant review (it's a writing for an exam) Last week I was in the Valencia's Oceanografic, it was amaizing but when I looked for a restaurant I was horrified with their prices, they were more expensive! So I decided to go to a mall that there was near of it. Well, into the mall there were several restaurants and I chose a tipical restaurant with dairy menu, it wasnt't bad-look, in the menu there were three mains dishes and three second dishes, dessert and drink, but when the waiter started to serve the table I thought that maybe I was wrong about this restaurant, there was bit food into the plate and this had been rehate several times, I didn't like nothing! Besides I was waiting quite time between dish and dish because the waiters were bad organized and didn't know where they should take care. Finally I gave the dessert, paid and left the restaurant because when it was crowded looked like to chaos, I think that I won't recommend it, and obviusly I did't leave a tip!
September 1, 2016
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What will you do? (Practicing my writing for exam) Hi guys, in the article of this week I will teach different tricks that we can use in your diary life. Well, what will you do if you have a biro mark in your jeans? Don't worry your jeans will be news if you pour milk in a bucket and put the stained side into it and let it during 2 hours, when you pick up it, first rub the biro spot and then it get into it the washing machine, I guarantee you that this mark will disappear. What will you do if there's a power cut, and you have a freezer full of food? Don't panic, it's very important that you don't open the freezer during the power cut because your food could ruin, but if the power cut go on for days I advice you to eat the food that there are into the freezer and you won't take away anything. Well, this are my advices this week, I hope be helpful
August 31, 2016
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An informar email (practing B1 exam) Hi everybody in general, I'm sending a e-mail to all my friends because the next month the company's theatre where I am learning performance will do a play, and I'll have a role in it, it is wonderful! I feel very lucky because I'm only learning three months and I have already chose for it. The play is a comedy which plot to tale the life of a family whose parents have been fire recently and how they are living day to day, the director have tryed that the spectators be able to see the comic side and they be able to have a funny and gratifying emotion when they have finished to see the play. Besides with the ticket you are helping for a good action because the fifty percent of this ticket will be destined to a ONG for homeless, so you can entertain and help at same time. There will be the last weekend of the next month and there will be two shows, the firts in the evening, at 6 p.m, and the last at night, at 22 p.m The cost of tickets not are many expesives, 20€ per ticket and it is a good reason, besides would be a good idea if we can meet when the performance finished and go out to drink something. I hope your rewrite as soon as posible because I have to reserve your tickets beforehand and I need your booking confirmation. Write me soon! Regards
August 29, 2016
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Summer work Summer is a perfect season where young graduates or students look for their first job. Somebody only want to earn money for can pay their expenses, other want to work and know if they didn't make a mistake when they chose their career or simply they used this season for take intership, with no guarantee of a permanent job at the end. A lot of people think that take a summer's work is easy but they are wrong, the most of this jobs are very stressful and you usually are doing a lot of worktime and it is bad-paid. The most of companys use this employers for get benefit from their skills but the most of employes tend to learn of it and get benefit from it too.
August 24, 2016
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A mail of complaint ( it is a writing exam of B1) Dear Sir, I'm writing to complain about your online delivery service which was failed to deliver a buquet of roses. Last week I called you because I had heard that you were pretty good and I reserved one buquet of roses for Mother's Day and on the website the promised me to deliver them on the same day. Anyway, not only you didn't deliver the buquet three days more later otherwise the buquet was delivered in another adress and the deliveryman didn't review it and let the deliver, it's unbelievable! Luckily my mother have good mood and she took that her neighbour delivered a buquet of roses with humor, but I think that your delivery service is enough expensive to don't deliver an order at time, besides three days later. To resolve the problem I would like a full and inmediate refund. If I don't hear from you within the next week, I shall be forced to contact my solicitor. Please contact with me by email or phone. I look forward to hearing from you and a quick resolution of this problem. Yours fairthfully, ....
August 17, 2016
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Do you have any interesting photo of yourself as a child? I have a photo which I adore because it remind me my childhood in my parent's house. That photo was taken in the garden of my parents in summer, and in the foreground there are my brother and me, my brother was a baby and there was lain on a towel in the grass, I was back of he trying to jump in the same towel and if you close look in the photo you can see one hand in the top right-hand corner, it is the hand of my father which try to get hold of me for I didn't fall over my brother. I think that he got it because when my mother remind it she doesn't stop laughing.
August 9, 2016
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Please, I need someone review my writing:Do you have any idea for saving money on holiday? There are different types of holidays which you can saving money, depend on who will be your partner. If you are an outgoing person and like you meeting other countries and their different cultures, peoples, foods and you don't matter be without many comfortably, you can choose between this type of cheap holidays: - Go couch-surfing, where local people will let you sleep on their sofa for free, here you can meet friendly locals and see how they really live. - Swap houses, it's a exchange houses with someone in the place you're going to visit. - Eat street food, in many cities you can find fook which is both tasty and cheap at stalls in the street. - Try "voluntourism", these holidays combine volunteer work and tourism. You'll save money and have experiences you'd never find on a package holidays.
August 8, 2016
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Please I need somebody review my writing, thanks : Where you fit in now? It's very difficult to know where you'll fit in your life. Our parents always want the best things for we and we want the best life for our children too. We are listening along our life different advices about that we should do or study and we try to choose the more suitable. We are studying long time in our life and then we decide where we want to work, where we want to spend our professional life,but suddenly a economical crisis or an important change arrive at your life and you should rewrite your life, but now you are adult and your targets are not similar when you were younger and ,obviusly you can't fit in the most of business and your profesional life start again but there is a difference, where you fit in now?
August 5, 2016
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