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Please I need somebody review my writing, thanks : Where you fit in now? It's very difficult to know where you'll fit in your life. Our parents always want the best things for we and we want the best life for our children too. We are listening along our life different advices about that we should do or study and we try to choose the more suitable. We are studying long time in our life and then we decide where we want to work, where we want to spend our professional life,but suddenly a economical crisis or an important change arrive at your life and you should rewrite your life, but now you are adult and your targets are not similar when you were younger and ,obviusly you can't fit in the most of business and your profesional life start again but there is a difference, where you fit in now?

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Please I need somebody review my writing, thanks : Where do you fit in now?

It's very difficult to know where you'll fit in in your life. Our parents always want the best things for we us and we want the best life lives for our children too.
We are listening along Throughout our life lives we listen to different advices about that we should do or study and we try to choose the more most suitable.
We are studying study for a long time in our lives and then we decide where we want to work, and where we want to spend our professional life lives ,but suddenly an economical crisis or an important change arrives at your life and you should  we have to  rewrite your our lives. But when you are an adult and your targets are not the same as when you were younger , you obviously can't restart your professional life.  Where do you fit in now?
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Please I need somebody review my writing, thanks : Where you fit in now?

It's very difficult for any one to  know How your life will turn out,.Our parents always want the best  for us .and we want the best life are children can have.

We hear so many things about what we  could  do,  maybe study first  to get a good job, and we always  try to choose the the best option for are self's

We  have  to studying for a  long time in our life and then we decide where we want to work, where we want to spend our professional life ,but suddenly a economical crisis or an important change arrive's in  your life and you have  to  rewrite your life, but now you are adult and your targets are not the same as  when you were younger and ,obviusly you can't fit in the most of business and your profesional life start again but there is a difference, where you fit in now?


It's very difficult to know How your life will turn out,


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Please I need somebody review my writing, thanks : Where you fit in now?

It's very difficult to know where you'll fit in your life.> It is very difficult to guess what  the future has in store for you .

Our parents always want to the best for  us, and we want the best that life can offer us for our children too.
We have been listening to advice throughout our lives on what we should do or study and to choose the best options available to us.
We have to spend a lot of time studying in our lives, after which we have to decide where we want to work and how we want to spend our professional life, but an economical crisis or an unexpected change in your life may suddenly happened that may force you to rethink  what you have planned for your future.  Therefore, as an adult,  your goals in life may not be  similar to those that you had when you were younger . 

you just can't fit in the most of business and your profesional life start again but there is a difference, where you fit in now? > This part is not clear .

So, you will find yourself in a situation whereby what you have studied is not helping you to get the job that you desire , so what should I do ?

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