outline of a project Hello, i need help to correct this little paragraph. It's an outline of my project work. Thank you very much！


This project work contains five parts. The first part is the introduction that briefly introduces the project. In the second chapter the author explains the background information about the book and the writer, the preparation before starting the translation, including a translation brief which describes who the target readers are and the translation objective. The current situation of the reception of the English translations translated from Chinese is also discussed in this chapter. It helped the author to decide which translation policy would be followed in this case study. Chapter three is composed of the English translation. In chapter four, he author explicates which translation strategies were used to resolve the problems in the translation process with the guidance of the functional translation theory by giving examples. The last chapter is the conclusion about the reflection on this translation practice.

outline of a project Hello, i need help to correct this little paragraph. It's an outline of my project work. Thank you very much！ This project work contains five parts. The first part is the introduction that briefly introduces the project. In the second chapter the author explains the background information about the book and the writer, the preparation before starting the translation, including a translation brief which describes who the target readers are and the translation objective. The current situation of the reception of the English translations translated from Chinese is also discussed in this chapter. It helped the author to decide which translation policy would be followed in this case study. Chapter three is composed of the English translation. In chapter four, he author explicates which translation strategies were used to resolve the problems in the translation process with the guidance of the functional translation theory by giving examples. The last chapter is the conclusion about the reflection on this translation practice.

The house rules Looking for help to correct some sentences! Hello! my Portuguese landlord made some rules for house and asked me to translate it into English. Could you please help me to correct it? Thank you very much! The text is below: I want to ask for your attention to the following three points: 1- Noises at the rest time: I’d like to ask you to not make noises at the rest time （9 pm to 9 am）, as some people need to rest in these hours. Therefore, the use of sound appliances, as well as other activities that may break the peace of the house during these hours are prohibited. 2- Untidy kitchen: after using the kitchen, it should be maintained in a tidy and clean condition. The dishes should not be left unwashed. And the food should not be left in the kitchen without placing it in an appropriate recipient or outside of the fridge. The food that is found outside the conditions as above mentioned will be placed into the garbage. 3- Washing machine- the washing machines continues to be used to wash small quantity of clothing. In this way, it not only contributes to the increase of the cost of the electricity, but also does harm to the washing machine. So from today, when the small quantity of clothes in the machine is found, I will take it from the machines and keep it. The clothes will be returned after the payment of a penalty of 10 euros. These points is a part of the general rules of the house. I hope they could be fulfilled, otherwise, i will have to take other measures. Thank you very much

House rules

An honest man

An honest man

Hello everyone! This is the second part of a short story written  by my friend, I translated it into English. Can anyone help me to correct? Thank you very much! Bcs of the words limit，the other part pls see my perfil！THANK U！

PART 2

“I knew I had made mistake and I admitted my guilt. I knew I should be punished, but I really can’t tell you where the money is.”

Finally the judge dished him out fifteen years.

Deducted from the holiday, the honest man stayed in the jail for 13 years. In the prison he still was a exemplary prisoner,  when he was free he read travel books or taught other prisoners to read and write.

Time flies, the honest man was released from the prison. His old boss was already retired but he couldn’t forget the old honest man, he was dying to know what had happened to the honest man and where had the money gone. At that time the door bell rang, the honest man stood front the door with a portfolio.

“Recently I had finally figured it out. I knew that I had made a huge mistake and disappointed everyone's expectation, I want to return the one hundred million to the bank. Sir, could you please go to the bank with me?  ” Finally the one hundred million, after the honest man being in the prison for 13 years, wen back to the bank.

In the first class cabin the old man held a cup of red wine, reading the travel magazine, decided to after going to Paris he will go to Iceland and then go to Russia to walk around.

The airline attendant who he just knew, pouting playfully, asked him, “What do you do on earth? How could you retire so early and have travel all over the world? ”

The honest man smiled, “I do investment business. Do you know how much you can earn after 13 years if you buy one hundred million non-registered bond with 6% interest? Two hundred and thirteen million and two hundred and ninety thousand, deduct from the principal capital, one hundred million, there is still more than one hundred and thirteen million and two hundred and ninety thousand, you can retire and travel all over the world with the interest.”

The airline attendant stretched herself and said flatteringly “How can I have one hundred million!”

The honest man replied “ Borrow. I just borrowed money. But remember you have to return after borrowing, it is what an ‘honest man’ do.”

EXCESSIVE CONSUMPTION OF ELECTRICITY

Hello! I'm writing a letter of complaint for my land lord to advise everyone in the house should save electricity. Can anyone help me to correct it? Thank you very much!

Oven - Consume large amounts of electricity . Should be used sensibly. <o:p></o:p>

Hot Baths - the water heater consumes large amounts of electricity. The showers should be taken quickly.<o:p></o:p>

Washing Machine-Should be used only with full loads of clothing, about 7 kg. Washing with small amounts of laundry consumes same energy when the machine is full and can do harm to the machine. <o:p></o:p>

Toasters and small household electric appliances - Though they are small, they also consume a lot of electricity. They should be used sensibly.<o:p></o:p>

 Lights: I have come across sometimes with lights on while no one was there, which also increased the consumption.

The use of several appliances at the same time throws the electricity down, so the management of the use of appliances should be practical. If this level of electricity consumption is maintained, in the next months of your contracts, I will have to increase your rent by around <font face="宋体">€ </font><font face="Calibri">20 / month / room.</font>

To avoid the increase I urge you to follow the above process. I would like to point out that it is forbidden to dry clothes on the heaters, because of the fire hazard!<o:p></o:p>

EXCESSIVE CONSUMPTION OF ELECTRICITY

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Hello, everyone

Im writing an complain letter to practice, does anyone can help to correct it? Thank you very much!

 In the last two months ( November and December) the electricity consumption reached more than 300,00 <font face="宋体">€ </font><font face="Calibri">per month, it doubled in relation to previous months.  </font><o:p></o:p>

The increase of people in the house and the cold that has done, didn’t not justify an increase of this dimension.<o:p></o:p>

 I have checked daily that there are other factors, which are wrong behaviors, contributed to the increase of the energy expenditure and also do harm to the safety of every one.<o:p></o:p>

Heaters - Consume large amounts of electricity, which can be used sensibly. They should never be turned on without people being around. Don’t dry clothes on your clothes on the heaters, cause it will be a serious fire hazard.<o:p></o:p>

diário Não tive aulas hoje, em vez disso, vi dois documentários. Um deles foi sobre o desenvolvimento da música lusófona. Na realidade, não me lembro muito deste documentário porque era totalmente em português e não houve nenhuma legenda. Não consegui compreender muita coisa. Mas percebi que a música lusófona foi um tipo de "arma" que contribuiu para revolucionar alguns países lusófonos num determinado tempo, o que me fez sentir a força da música. Além disso, também senti que a música lusófona estava a tornar-se mais animada e moderna. Gostei de duas canções, Gaivota e Carinhoso. Depois, vi outro documentário que foi sobre as cooperações económicas dentro da China e países lusófonos. À noite, jantei fora com uma amiga minha da Universidade. Nestes dois anos, ela tem estudado na Universidade de Macau e ela fala português muito bem. Fomos a um restaurante pequeno mas muito especial. Comemos uma sobremesa deliciosa e outros pratos saborosos. Conversámos muito felizes. Finalmente, voltamos para o campus juntos. Estava muito contente hoje.