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Advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad
Nowadays, a high proportion of high school graduates are enthusiastic about continuing higher education in high-ranking universities of the world; therefore, they travel abroad to study in those universities. Clear-sighted authorities claim that studying at a foreign university has its own advantages and disadvantages.
Some significant drawbacks of studying in a foreign university are being discussed in this paragraph. Firstly, some students feel homesick and they miss their families; therefore, they may refer to unsuitable friends to compensate the loss of their families, which finally leads to some personal issues such as addiction or sexual abuse. Secondly, most of the students experience culture shock; it means that students have trouble communicating people. Furthermore, they are unfamiliar with the customs and cultures of the destination country.
On the other hand, studying abroad has some great benefits. Students usually study in prestigious universities. These universities are well-equipped and they employ lecturers who are expert in their fields; hence, students get well-prepared in their major and this will guarantee them a promising future (social status, job opportunities, etc). Another noticeable merit of studying in a foreign university is that it can broaden students' horizons and they can enhance their outlook on life and gain a variety of useful experiences.
In brief, studying abroad has its pros and cons; however, in my opinion the advantages of studying abroad override its disadvantages; thus, it is worth bearing the difficulties of travel and living in a foreign country.
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please correct my mistakes :)
In sociology the way that people live, including their living conditions, behavior and habits is considered as their lifestyle. In the modern world there are a variety of different lifestyles; thus, some people tend to change their lifestyle and experience new ones, although some others are determined to follow a stable lifestyle. Both of these ideas are elaborated below.
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please correct my mistakes :)
In sociology the way that people live, including their living conditions, behavior and habits is considered as their lifestyle. In the modern world there are a variety of different lifestyles; thus, some people tend to change their lifestyle and experience new ones, although some others are determined to follow a stable lifestyle, which are both elaborated below.
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Effect of increasing fines on decreasing the number of road accidents! (please tell me my mistakes )
One of the heartbreaking reports that I often read in daily papers is about the high rate of dead and injured car passengers in Iran .It is believed that imposing heavy fines to the law-breaker drivers by the traffic police can reduce the number of road accidents. I absolutely believe that this procedure forces the majority of drivers to obey the driving rules. Furthermore, it prevents the financial losses due to the car accidents.
( I have a few ideas about this topic.Would you please help me to develop my text ? )
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whould you please correct my mistakes? (grammar and vocabulary)
Upper graph shows that in 1987, 65% of people got the world news from television.This proportion hit a low in 1989 when it fell down to just less than 60% .After this year it increased and remained about 70% until 1997.Newspaper popularity which was 25% in 1987 experienced an slight decrease from 1989 to 1990 and reached approximately 20% , then it had a constant trend up to 1997.The proportion of people who got the news from radio was roughly stable around 9% and it was also the least popular media during that period.
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grammar doubt
Are these sentences correct ? (grammar and meaning)
These charts represent how British people were informed about recent local and global news from 1987 to 1997.As can be clearly noticed , most of people used to get the world news from television , while they preferred to read newspapers to become aware of the regional events.
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Is there any volunteer to revise my essays? :D
I need somebody to help me improve my written English.At the moment I'm practicing to describe graphs and charts.
Please help me if you have time.
Thx a lot :D
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