Please can you correct this Chinese sentence.
Please can you correct this Chinese sentence.

他总是那么忙关注所有别的女人，永远都不会注意到我, (还没意识到我也喜欢他) In English I would say something like, He's always so busy noticing all the other women to ever notice me. ( He still hasn't noticed/realised I like him too) He's too busy noticing all the other woman, he never notices me. ( He still hasn't noticed/realised I like him too)

Thank you!

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Please can you correct this Chinese sentence.
Please can you correct this Chinese sentence.

他总是那么忙关注所有别的女人，永远都不会注意到我, (还没意识到我也喜欢他) In English I would say something like, He's always so busy noticing all the other women to ever notice me. ( He still hasn't noticed/realised I like him too) He's too busy noticing all the other woman, he never notices me. ( He still hasn't noticed/realised I like him too)

Thank you!

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他总是忙于关注其他女人，却从没注意到我。（他始终不知道我喜欢他）

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他总是忙着关注别的女人,永远都不会注意到我(他还没意识到我喜欢他).

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“他总是忙于关心别的女人，永远不会关心到我。”（it could be more idiomatic if you substitute 关心 for 关注）

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this  chinese  is  almost  right ,even not  that  fluncy and  elegence .you  could  say :
他像个花蝴蝶一样穿梭在花丛里，却忽视了我期待的美丽。

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He's too busy noticing all the other woman, he never notices me. ( He still hasn't noticed/realised I like him too)

他总是忙于关注其他的女人,却从来都没有关注过我.(他仍然不知道我喜欢他).

加油!!
^_^

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