Ummm...which one would like corrected?

This is impressive to have to write about a somewhat complex topic in English. I assume this must be for work. I don't fully understand the topic nor the specific language that is used in this area, so I won't be able to give you a foolproof correction, as I will just focus on grammar issues and not vocabulary. In landscape space aspect, we use urban forests and wetlands as the main body to protect urban biodiversity and water environment. Through establishing a reasonable structure of urban economic and nutrition we maintain a reasonable ecological urban landscape structure and provide excellent quality for the environment. Meanwhile, we want to plan and construct the urban system of three-dimensional landscape space with an ecological function, a play and relaxation function and a landscape function, creating characteristics and features of the city to make it possess ecology, art and view values to satisfy people’s need for tourism aesthetics and culture experiences. In community space aspect, we protect the historic district's idiomatical landscape which is the common wealth of the citizens and the cultural capital of the community development. This action provides adequate succession space for the urban context heritage. We elevate the citizens’ culture, enrich community humanity ecology, and provide care service for the legacy tourists. We also promote the use of new technologies and energies enhancing the ability to handle municipal waste and wastewater treatment, and solidly creating green community space to improve the community environment and micro-climate. Finally we will create a green human settlement. I said I wouldn't change vocabulary, however one exception was this: I changed "We excavate the citizens’ culture" to "We elevate the citizens’ culture" In this context, excavate doesn't make sense, elevate is a similar spelled word, but fairly different meaning, and seems to fit better. Although I don't know for sure what word you were looking for.

I think you should post this on italki Notebook...