could anyone correct my english sentences ? :D
i practed to make sentences in english with some words.
could anyone correct my sentence if i made any grammartical mistake? please xD

1. You shouldn't be afraid of subordinate to your lover.

2. her weakness is origin from her luxuriant background since she was born.

3. Ancient time was the outbreaking period of attempt each other.

4. kid Should know what kind of subject makes him being enthusiastic.

5. Valuable things that she wanted to maintain were not proper to reality.

Question

could anyone correct my english sentences ? :D
i practed to make sentences in english with some words.
could anyone correct my sentence if i made any grammartical mistake? please xD

1. You shouldn't be afraid of subordinate to your lover.

2. her weakness is origin from her luxuriant background since she was born.

3. Ancient time was the outbreaking period of attempt each other.

4. kid Should know what kind of subject makes him being enthusiastic.

5. Valuable things that she wanted to maintain were not proper to reality.

Answer

It’s hard to correct because it could depend on what you really meant. Here’s my suggestions:

1. You shouldn’t be afraid to be submissive to you lover
2. The root of her weakness is that she grew in a luxuriant family.
3. Ancient times was a period of insurrection attempts.
4. Kids should know what kind of subjects makes him enthusiastic.
5. Material things she wanted to maintain were not really essentials.

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