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IAM trying to write in English so is that right or wrong Hi everyone I am trying to improve my writing in English so can anyone tell my if made any mistake in Vocabularys or in grammar Hello everyone today we are speaking about pyramids in Egypt and why pyramids have triangle shape ancient Egyptian they had belief that the king's after his death he became a God in the sky so all the kings were sons of horas and they becames God after there death and they want to the sky so they made the payment like triangle shape like stairs

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Hello everyone today we are going to talk about Pyramids in Egypt Why Pyramids have triangle shapes?. Ancient Egyptian had a belief that Kings after death they become Gods in the sky, so all Kings were sons and they also became Gods after death and they want the sky to make a payment such as the triangle shape and stars
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Hi everyone I am trying to improve my writing in English so can anyone tell my if *I* made any mistakes in *Vocabulary* or in grammar Hello everyone today we are speaking about pyramids in Egypt and why pyramids have triangle shape ancient Egyptian they had belief that the *theirs* *king* after his death he became a God in the sky so all the kings were sons of *Horas* and they *became* God after *their* death and they *went* to the sky so they made the payment like triangle shape like stairs *Your writing is much better than me.*

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