could you please help my friend revise her application? she wants her application looks formal. she wants her application looks formal so that it might give her bigger chance to success. thank you for your great help. Here is here application: I am in a really stable, defacto relationship with my partner for more than two and a half years. We have been living with each other for more than a year from sharing a house to rent a place for us two. Due to the travel restriction, I am not able to get back with my partner and my job, which has put us under a lot of pressure mentally and financially. Being apart from each other is already sad for the both of us. In the past 3 months, I've been looking for jobs in my home country so I can attempt to meet the financial demands of a Sydney home. I also have been paying rent with my savings in the past 3 months since me and my partner is splitting out rent and bill equally. Me not being able to work and get paid on time, we both are pretty stressed about our finances since we have no idea how long the travel restriction will last.