How to make this long sentence better?
For example, while in the past, we have to travel a long way to visit historical sites or museums, not to mention that not everyone can afford the travel expenses and other costs, now with the help of internet and cameras, most of us can visit traditional cultural resorts online with a simple click of the mouse.
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Split it into two separate sentences. :)
For example, we had to travel a long way to visit historical sites or museums in the past, not to mention that not everyone could afford the travel expenses and other costs. Now, with the help of the internet and cameras, most of us can visit traditional cultural sites online with a simple click of the mouse.
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For example, back in the days, traveling a long way to visit some historical places wasn't an easy thing to do due to the expenses and stuff like that. Thanks to technology, we can easily experience an online tour via our mobile phones and laptops which is super awesome.
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For example, back in the days, traveling a long way to visit some historical places wasn't an easy thing to do due to the expenses and stuff like that. Thanks to technology, we can easily experience an online tour via our mobile phones and laptops which is super awesome.
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For example, while in the past, we HAD to travel a long way to visit historical sites or museums, not to mention that not everyone COULD afford the travel expenses and other costs, now with the help of the internet and cameras, most of us can visit traditional cultural resorts online with a simple click of the mouse.
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