Could you find incongruences in the text, please?information that may not be clear thank you
This project involved 3 departments Vault, Restauration shop, Library Center & customer service all of them separate in different locations and similar PROBLEMS, computers were not connected in net, neither of them had new IT technologies, because they worked with separate PCs using an old ISIS storage system where they kept material’s location and information and they all had clients to serve with material or information and these tasks were slow, complicated. My Boss started helping the film department’s director, suggested to migrate their information to an SQL database that he programmed. My participation in this project was (learned about my abilities: to learn by looking at my boss, to be a self-learner that implements researched solutions and working for results assuming responsibility of outcomes) to be in charge for researching an updated versions of ISIS, which I found and even if it wasn’t a multi-user version it had a very useful window’s users interface. Through trial- error and an old backup information, I figured out how to access past information and I was able to migrate it, so every user in other areas could check the information they needed online. To complete the project I configured a PC as server so areas and users could get information in real time

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Could you find incongruences in the text, please?information that may not be clear thank you
This project involved 3 departments Vault, Restauration shop, Library Center & customer service  all of them separate in different locations and similar PROBLEMS, computers were not connected in net, neither of them had new IT technologies, because they worked with separate PCs using an old ISIS storage system where they kept material’s location  and information and they all had clients to serve with material or information and these tasks were slow, complicated. My Boss started helping the film department’s director, suggested to migrate their information to an SQL database that he programmed. My participation in this project was (learned about my abilities: to learn by looking at my boss, to be a self-learner that implements researched solutions and working for results assuming responsibility of outcomes) to be in charge for researching an updated versions of ISIS, which I found and even if it wasn’t a multi-user version it had a very useful window’s users interface. Through trial- error and an old backup information, I figured out how to access past information and I was able to migrate it, so every user in other areas could check the information they needed online. To complete the project I configured a PC as server so areas and users could get information in real time

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Is this a record of spoken language? It is not grammatiacally correct in a way that spoken language often isn't.

This project involved 3 departments Vault, Restauration shop, Library Center & customer service
Sentence? Full stop?, ppear to be four departments.

Capital letter? All of them separate in different locations and similar PROBLEMS,

and what? problems? have similar problems?

:?
which include ...?
computers were not connected in net, 
in a network? to the net?

New sentence?
Neither of them 
Neither does not get used with three or four, only two.

None of them had new IT technologies, because they worked with separate PCs using an old ISIS storage system where they kept material’s location

Unclear what is intended by "kept material’s location"

and information and they all had clients to serve with material or information and these tasks were slow, and? complicated.

My Boss 
"boss" 
started helping the film department’s director, suggested to migrate their information to an SQL database that he programmed.

My participation in this project was (learned a

Not at all what you want. See comment.

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Not at all clear. Looks like spoken language. Do you want corrections? It made regular? meaning? logical problem?
Sorry,not at all clear what you are wanting.

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I am having a real hard time to read your text. I recommend you make shorter sentences to start with.

Example:
This project involved three departments; [...]. All of them were in different locations, but they had similar problems.

This won't fix all problems, but it will make it already much clearer.

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