Let's get to acquainted :-)
Hi everyone!

My name is Ildar. I am a teacher of physics and mathematics in Tomsk state university of control systems and radioelectronics. Also I have a Little Coffee Shop in Tomsk.

I like to play piano, conversation on phylosophical themes, astronomy, travelers, human relationsheep, ecological themes and also about coffee! :-)

My goal - knowing English on the B2 level or more, becouse I whant to teach my subjects in English.

I will more then happy to teach you speak Russian or teach you mathematics and physics, if you need.

So, is the right introduction text?
Thank you for advices! :-)

Question

Let's get to acquainted :-)
Hi everyone!

My name is Ildar. I am a teacher of physics and mathematics in Tomsk state university of control systems and radioelectronics. Also I have a Little Coffee Shop in Tomsk.

I like to play piano, conversation on phylosophical themes, astronomy, travelers, human relationsheep, ecological themes and also about coffee! :-)

My goal - knowing English on the B2 level or more, becouse I whant to teach my subjects in English.

I will more then happy to teach you speak Russian or teach you mathematics and physics, if you need.

So, is the right introduction text?
Thank you for advices! :-)

Answer

Writing your introduction again is understandable, even if you haven't corrected it,  and even if that isn't what people normally do. I do however think that deleting the text of the previous one you posted was not very honest.

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