can anybody help me to check my reference letter for a graduate program?
To whom it may concern,

As a professor at the School of Management in xx University in China, I am pleased to recommend Zhou, one of my promising students to work on his master degree to your program. I now write this letter to illustrate his academic performance and personal quality to support his application.

As his essay instructor, the first time I got to interact with him was at year 2015, when he was enrolled in my class of Financial Investment. From then on, I started to know that he is a very modest and diligent student with rigorous attitude, since he always answered difficult questions and discussed ideas with me. He showed an intellectual curiosity for knowledge and he got a high score(91) in this class.

(this is part1 of the reference letter)

Question

can anybody help me to check my reference letter for a graduate program?
To whom it may concern,

As a professor at the School of Management in xx University in China, I am pleased to recommend Zhou, one of my promising students to work on his master degree to your program. I now write this letter to illustrate his academic performance and personal quality to support his application.

As his essay instructor, the first time I got to interact with him was at year 2015, when he was enrolled in my class of Financial Investment. From then on, I started to know that he is a very modest and diligent student with rigorous attitude, since he always answered difficult questions and discussed ideas with me. He showed an intellectual curiosity for knowledge and he got a high score(91) in this class.

(this is part1 of the reference letter)

Answer

You should submit this sort of questions in the notebook section so that correction can be made easier through the use of the formatting features there.  As it is worded, it is not professional/formal enough from a person of academic standing.

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