Are these sentences written correctly?
1 She smiled during the conversation as if I was telling something funny.

2 I fell on the ground and all the things I was holding jumped of my hands.

3 All the passengers were jumping in the bus while it was going on the bumpy road.

Question

Are these sentences written correctly?
1  She smiled during the conversation as if I was telling something funny.

2  I fell on the ground and all the things I was holding jumped of my hands.

3  All the passengers were jumping in the bus while it was going on the bumpy road.

Answer

Hello Timur, 
You did a great job. Here are some corrections I would suggest:
1.) She smiled during the conversation as if I was telling HER something funny.
2.) I fell on the ground and all the things I was holding FELL FROM my hands.
3.) All OF the passengers were JUMPY ON the bus while it was going on the bumpy road. 
OR 
THE BUMPY ROAD MADE ALL THE PASSENGERS ON THE BUS HAVE A BUMPY RIDE.

Answer

1 She smiled during the conversation as if I was telling something funny.  I was "saying" something

2 I fell on the ground and all the things I was holding jumped of my hands.    jumped "out" of my hands

3 All the passengers were jumping in the bus while it was going on the bumpy   were "bouncing" in

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