Are these sentences about child labour correct? (grammar)
Hello,
im not sure if these sentences about child labour are correct (spelling & grammar).
If you had an improvements, so that it would sound better, I would love to hear them.
It would be amazing if you could correct them please:)

- 168 million children suffer under child labour
- This is more than 1 of 10 children of the overall population.
- More than 70% of the worlds child labourers are between 5 and 14 years old.
- Nearly 2/3 takes place in agriculture.
- More than the half work under hazardous conditions that harms their health, safety or moral development.
- With more than 10 mil child labourers India has the highest number worldwide.

Question

Are these sentences about child labour correct? (grammar)
Hello,
im not sure if these sentences about child labour are correct (spelling & grammar).
If you had an improvements, so that it would sound better, I would love to hear them.
It would be amazing if you could correct them please:)

- 168 million children suffer under child labour
- This is more than 1 of 10 children of the overall population.
- More than 70% of the worlds child labourers are between 5 and 14 years old.
- Nearly 2/3 takes place in agriculture.
- More than the half work under hazardous conditions that harms their health, safety or moral development. 
- With more than 10 mil child labourers India has the highest number worldwide.

Answer

A couple of minor things: "1 in 10 children"      "...world's child labourers"       "More than half..."

Answer

- 168 million or 1 out of 10 children suffer from child labor (language efficiency)
- More than 70% of the world child labors are between 5 and 14 years old
- Nearly 2/3 takes place in agriculture sector
- More than half lives under hazardous conditions that harms their health, safety or moral development.
- India has the highest number of child labor worldwide with more than 10 million child labors

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