The more I speak broken English, the more I feel stressed.
Does this make sense? Furthermore, would you amend these sentences so they can become more usual?

"I sort out my thoughts like this.

The more I speak broken English, the more I feel stressed.

After that, I try to correct my broken English by myself.

This procedure makes me improve English speaking skills."

Question

The more I speak broken English, the more I feel stressed.
Does this make sense? Furthermore, would you amend these sentences so they can become more usual?

"I sort out my thoughts like this.

The more I speak broken English, the more I feel stressed.

After that, I try to correct my broken English by myself.

This procedure makes me improve English speaking skills."

Answer

Grammatically, there is nothing wrong with any of your four sentences. However, for me, they'd sound better if written like this:

"Here is how I think: the more broken I think my English is, the more stressed I feel. Because of this, I try to correct my mistakes by myself. This procedure helps me improve my English speaking skills."

I hope this helps you. Please let me know if you have any further questions.

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