Can you find 10 mistakes in this short passage?
If there are only 10 mistakes in this passage,what do you think they might be(Tip:you can add or dash out words ,or change its form). Here is the passage.

Recently every morning and evening, many people gathered to dance in our community square, where is designed to improve living quality .Although dancing helps to keep healthy, but the long-time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really brought incovenient. I couldn't rest or sleep well , which made me terrible upset. I felt such sleepy in class that I performed worse in study. To solve a problem, I communicated with the organizers and suggested that they should shorten the dance time and reduced the music noise. Only this way can they have fun and ley others enjoy life.To their delight ,they adopted my suggestion.

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Can you find 10 mistakes in this short passage?
If there are only 10 mistakes in this passage,what do you think they might be(Tip:you can add  or dash out words ,or change its form).    Here is the passage.

Recently every morning and evening, many people gathered to dance in our community square, where is designed to improve living quality .Although dancing helps to keep healthy, but the long-time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really brought incovenient.    I couldn't rest or sleep well , which made me terrible upset.   I felt such sleepy in class that I performed worse in study.   To solve a problem, I communicated with the organizers and suggested that they should shorten the dance time and reduced the music noise.   Only this way can they have fun and ley others enjoy life.To their delight ,they adopted my suggestion.

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yangxin,you corrected eleven mistakes.I think your corrections are right according to our exam paper.Thanks.I made the same corrections except I didn't correct "dance time"

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I second Su.Ki. – repost your message in your Notebook (it's under the “Browse” heading, which is the second column in the bottom menu) and I'll post my corrections there.

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It's full of mistakes - far more than 10!  Repost this in the Notebook section, and someone might be kind enough to translate this into proper English, highlighting all the things that are wrong.

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Recently every morning and evening, many people gathered to dance in our community square, which is designed to improve living quality .Although dancing helps to keep healthy, the long-time dancing and loud noise caused by the loudspeaker really brought incovenience. I couldn't rest or sleep well , which made me terribly upset. I felt so sleepy in class that I performed worse in study. To solve the problem, I communicated with the organizers and suggested that they should shorten the dancing time and reduce the music noise. Only in this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life.To my delight ,they adopted my suggestion.
T_TI dont know If my  corrections r right.

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