Hello! I suggest these changes, but overall it was very good! Well done. :) ### The “Kyodai (Kyoto University)” handkerchiefs have recently been put on sale! Cute figures associated with Kyodai are embroidered on them, such as the symbolic clock tower, a unique student, etc. This would be a good souvenir for a student's family or the students studying to enter Kyoto University.* The selections are: The clock tower / the camphor tree** A gorilla (The incumbent president of Kyoto University is the leading researcher on gorillas) / Mt. Daimonji Ika-kyo (a “typical” kyodai student look) / the Fibonacci sequence (The clock tower and the camphor tree in front of the main gate are the symbol of my university.) ### *There's nothing wrong with this sentence, especially in conversation. However, in writing it can bit a bit confusing to read 'students' and 'study' repeated so many times within a sentence. You could refer to the second group of students as 'high school students' or change the second 'studying' to 'practicing for exams to enter Kyoto University.' **Does the / mean that there is a different design on each side of a hankerchief? It sounds very pretty. :)