Les avantages de la technologie moderne sont nombreux. Pour moi ( better: en ce qui me concerne), l'aspect le plus pratique est de pouvoir rester en contact avec mes amis et ma famille quelque soit l'endroit où je me trouve dans le monde. You are absolutely right Michele. But don't forget that Internet is also very convenient for learning languages, for example with me... Michel

What Gaëtan is saying is that you should publish this in the "Notebooks" section of iTalki. That's where people correct long texts. (I see that you've already done that, but I'll leave my comment for anyone else who might be confused.) The "Answers" section is to get answers to specific questions.

Il y a des erreurs, mais je n'arrive pas à corriger.. ^^ I think you chose the wrong option to publish your text