Could anyone correct this intro, please?It's about an essay about the novel Talking It Over
It is said that the general concept of love may be defined as the engine of the world. It is what gives people strength to keep on struggling in this hard world full of egoism as well as selfishness and where money is commonly believed to be the root of evil. For some human beings, love is a just a feeling which helps us either to overcome obstacles or believe in miracles. For some others, it is more than a feeling as, for example, a mother does not feel she loves her baby who is crying at three a.m. Therefore, there are many interpretations of the word love depending on the person’s age, sex, background, values and context, among others. However, in the case of the English writer Julian Barnes, author of the novel Talking It Over, it is clearly seen how pessimistic he is regarding the concept of love in terms of not only friendship love, but also friendship and family love.It is said that the general concept of love may be defined as the engine of the world. It is what gives people strength to keep on struggling in this hard world full of egoism as well as selfishness. For some human beings, love is just a feeling which helps us either to overcome obstacles or believe in miracles. For some others, it is more than a feeling as, for example, a mother does not feel she loves her baby who is crying at three a.m. Therefore, there are many interpretations of the word love depending on the person’s age, sex, background, values and context, among others. However, in the case of the English writer Julian Barnes, author of the novel Talking It Over, it is clearly seen how pessimistic he is regarding love in terms of not only what concerns friendship, but also sexuality and family too.

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Could anyone correct this intro, please?It's about an essay about the novel Talking It Over
It is said that the general concept of love may be defined as the engine of the world. It is what gives people strength to keep on struggling in this hard world full of egoism as well as selfishness and where money is commonly believed to be the root of evil. For some human beings, love is a just a feeling which helps us either to overcome obstacles or believe in miracles. For some others, it is more than a feeling as, for example, a mother does not feel she loves her baby who is crying at three a.m. Therefore, there are many interpretations of the word love depending on the person’s age, sex, background, values and context, among others. However, in the case of the English writer Julian Barnes, author of the novel Talking It Over, it is clearly seen how pessimistic he is regarding the concept of love in terms of not only friendship love, but also friendship and family love.It is said that the general concept of love may be defined as the engine of the world. It is what gives people strength to keep on struggling in this hard world full of egoism as well as selfishness. For some human beings, love is just a feeling which helps us either to overcome obstacles or believe in miracles. For some others, it is more than a feeling as, for example, a mother does not feel she loves her baby who is crying at three a.m. Therefore, there are many interpretations of the word love depending on the person’s age, sex, background, values and context, among others. However, in the case of the English writer Julian Barnes, author of the novel Talking It Over, it is clearly seen how pessimistic he is regarding love in terms of not only what concerns friendship, but also sexuality and family too.

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Two pieces of advice:

1.  Post it on Notebook for easier correction.

2.  If you are.interested in having the content assessed in addition to having the language reviewed, post the entire essay via a web link on the internet so that we can assess this introduction in context.

Otherwise, it is a well-written piece with only minor mistakes.

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1. "..full of egoism as well as selfishness and where money is commonly believed to be the root of evil."

full of egoism as well as selfishness, where money is commonly believed to be the root of all evil.

2. ".. For some others, it is more than a feeling as, for example, a mother does not feel.."

For others, it is more than a feeling.  For example, a mother does does not feel.."

Everything else was good, nice job.

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the second part is the other version. Thanks in advance

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