What exactly is the question? :-) You can look up the words "auspacken", "einschlafen", "einziehen", "erziehen", "zurückfahren" e.g. here: http://de.pons.com/ The participles and separated verb forms etc. are formed correctly, so the question probably isn't about the grammar. "Noch" has various uses, for example in "weder X noch Y" = neither X nor Y, or in "noch nicht" = not yet etc.. The fragment given is too short to decide which one is meant. "Schließlich" and "endlich" are very similar. "Endlich" puts a bit more emphasis on that you were waiting impatiently for it to happen and it finally did. "Schließlich" puts more emphasis on a final action as a natural consequence.