can you make these sentences more advance?
This is an opportunity to kill two birds with one stone. I have a book called The Twilight Sage, which was written in English by Stephen Meyer, and published in America. If you wish to learn English, it not a bad choice. Furthermore, this book was written printed using with a high quality papers. so it is light enough to be carried around about it. Moreover , it is kept has been looked after very well, so that it looks brand new. I desire for an am keen to get the Real Face Book of The Vampire Diary; I am willing to swap i will sawp mine for yours.
If you want to swap with me, please leave a message to for me

Question

can you make these sentences more advance?
This is an opportunity to kill two birds with one stone. I have a book called The Twilight Sage, which was written in English by Stephen Meyer, and published in America. If you wish to learn English, it not a bad choice. Furthermore, this book was written printed using with a high quality papers. so it is light enough to be carried around about it. Moreover ,  it is kept has been looked after very well, so that it looks brand new. I desire for an am keen to get the Real Face Book of The Vampire Diary; I am willing to swap i will sawp mine for yours. 
If you want to swap with me, please leave a message to for me

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I have an English book called "The Twilight Sage" written by Stephen Meyer and printed in the US. It is a good choice for those who learn English. I used my copy with care and it is in a very good condition. I want to have a printed version of "The Vampire Diary". So, if you have one we could swap our books.

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Deep sea, why did you post the same uncorrected text  (http://www.italki.com/entry/375534) when it had already been corrected?

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