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To Whom It May Concern:
Shortly after graduating from the University of Hertfordshire (BSc Astrophysics degree) and attaining my TEFL certificate from the University College of London in mid 2004, I moved to Shanghai. I then proceeded to study a Chinese language and culture course in Shanghai International Studies University (SISU) which lasted approximately 1year.
呢?

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看你们的咯! 呵呵 (仔细的检查) 2
那:
To Whom It May Concern:
Shortly after graduating from the University  of Hertfordshire (BSc Astrophysics degree) and attaining my TEFL certificate from the University College of London in mid 2004, I moved to Shanghai. I then proceeded to study a Chinese language and culture course in Shanghai International Studies University (SISU) which lasted approximately 1year. 
呢?

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致相关负责人：
      2004年中旬本人先在赫特福德郡大学获得了天体物理学理学士学位，又在伦敦大学学院获得了英语教师资格证书，本人随即搬来上海。然后本人在上海外国语大学进修了为期一年的关于中国语言和文化方面的课程。

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致有关人员：
　　本人在2004年的中旬毕业于的赫特福德郡（ BSC的天体物理学学士），并且获得了伦敦大学学院颁发的英语教学证书。之后不久便来到了上海，然后开始在上海外国语大学（上外）学习了大约一年的中国语言及文化的相关课程。

Maybe it's not the best translation, any mistakes please find out for me anytime.
Regards

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to whom may concerned:
不能说study a corse, 应该是take a course
别的就没什么了。

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我也要试下,不过对我来说太难拉
要是我，我会说
graduating和attaining为什么不能是graduated & attained

then i have proceeded to study chinese language and culture in shanghai int'l studies university for approximately 1years

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大叔 您真有闲情

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