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To conclude, there are several compelling arguments both for and against whether video games are beneficial for individuals or it can have adverse effects on them. In my opinion, the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits, because playing such games causes numerous problems for individuals, ranging from diverse health problems to influence individuals' future lives.
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In conclusion, there are several compelling arguments both in favor and against whether video games are beneficial for individuals or they can have adverse effects on them.
In my opinion, the drawbacks of video games outweighs the benefits, because playing such games can cause numerous problems for individuals, ranging from diverse health problems to the influence it might have on individuals' future lives.
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Hello Sarah:
This conclusion is partially clear. For a part of a concluding paragraph, it will suffice.
However, what it really needs is something more specific. For example, when one writes; "causes numerous problems...etc." that can be expanded by specific examples.
.--Warm Regards, Bruce
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