Are these sentences correct?
1, Hello I've seen your post on the Internet. Is single room still available? Do you mind if I see a room tomorrow?
2, I'm 23 woman from Korea, student. Do you mind if I go there between 10 - 11 am on sat?
3, I'm the girl who is going to view the room tomorrow. I realized that there is no Internet in your house. I'm afraid I can't go tomorrow, looking for a room to use the Internet. sorry. Rgds.
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1, Hello I SAW your ADVERT on the Internet. Is THE single room still available? Do you mind if I COME AND SEE THE room tomorrow?
2, I'm A GIRL, 23, A STUDENT from Korea. Do you mind if I COME between 10 - 11 am on SATURDAY?
3, THIS IS (NAME). I WAS going to view the room tomorrow. I JUST realized that there is no Internet in your house. I'm afraid I WON'T BE COMING tomorrow. I'M looking for a room to WITH Internet. SORRY FOR THE TROUBLE. REgARDds.
**Do not use text English in written communications with strangers. It is extremely rude.**
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Next time, post it as a note entry. This way, you can see the corrections in highlight and see what you wrote wrongly or not in a more natural way :)
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1. Hello. I've seen your post on the Internet. Is a single room still available? Do you mind if I see the room tomorrow?
2. I'm a 23-year-old woman from Korea. I'm a student. Do you mind if I go there between 10 and 11 a.m. on Saturday?
3. I'm the girl who was going to view the room tomorrow. I've learned that there is no Internet in your house. I'm afraid I won't be going tomorrow. I'm looking for a room which has Internet access. Sorry.
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