中国的美食很有名。(100% right) 不同地方的人都已经有最喜欢的菜。（no, that’s not right ,I know what you mean but what you write down is not what you mean ,try this one”不同地方都有不同的特色菜，那些特色菜也正是当地人最喜欢吃的” , 特色菜 means some dishes that the local people like most） 你将来去了中国必须敢吃很多不同的菜。（not that natural ,try this one “将来如果你去中国，一定要去尝试吃不同地方的特色菜”） 如果你没吃，才错过很多好吃的。（如果你不去尝试，那么你一定会错过很多好吃的） 南京也一个地方有非常好吃的菜。（although the sentence is right from the perspective of grammar, but if you say the sentence ,we may misunderstand that Nanjing just have one place where food is delicious ,but actually Nanjing have lots of yummy food, so you need to change the sentence to “据我所知，南京有一个地方的菜非常好吃” and if you take down this sentence ,it means that you just introduce to us one place where the dishes there is damn good ） 现在我给你介绍南京大学附近的一些地方。(现在我给你介绍一下南京大学附近一些有很多好吃的东西的地方 is better) 南大的南边一条路叫广州路（change the sequence of sentence 南大南边的一条路叫广州路） 广州路上有很多的饭馆儿。(good ,but no need to say 儿，cuz as the time goes by ,we don’t use the 儿at the end of a noun any more, maybe it’s outdated in lots of religions except few cities like Beijing ) 你可以吃英国菜，又吃香港菜。别忘了访问一家商店叫’尹氏鸡汁汤包‘。(你可以吃到英国菜，又可以吃到香港菜。别忘了去一家叫做“尹氏鸡汁汤包”的店尝尝汤包。“访问”cannot be used in this sentence cuz 访问 is designed for visiting some formal places like one country. Also 商店 is intended to describe some shops which sell many goods not food ,maybe clothes or machine, you can say 名字叫做…..的店) 当然，明年九月你去南京的时候已经可以找的更多好的吃的。（当然，明年9九月份，你去南京的时候，你就会找到更多好吃的地方 in the sentence ,you cannot use 已经 cuz you haven’t been to Nanjing before） Oh ,by the way ,what I wanna tell you is that I am the native of Nanjing and I study in Nanjing medical university, and uh, welcome to Nanjing !

hello. there are some mistakes in your article. we say 每个地方都有自己的特色菜敢吃， this word is not appropriate。we use 尝试 means try 如果你没吃过， 会错过很多好吃的。 your chinese is pretty good。

hello. there are some mistakes in your article. we say 每个地方都有自己的特色菜 敢吃， this word is not appropriate。we use 尝试 means try 如果你没吃过， 会错过很多好吃的。 your chinese is pretty good。