I have corrected your writing[ not writhing] task . What is your title? Korea is a beautiful country but I hope that our country does not over develop the natural environment because nature is very important for all people. I want to visit America , Australia and Canada because firstly, my cousin lived in America and secondly because I hope to see a koala and a kangaroo, which are two very cute animals. Finally, Canada is my friend's country, so at some stage I will be over to see my friend there. Four years ago, I travelled around Europe for 16 days with my friends. We visited Prague in the Czech Republic, Hungary, Vienna and Austria, Heidelberg and Munich in Germany.

Korea is a beautiful country but I hope that our country does not develop anymore in nature because nature is very important for all people. I want to visit America , Australia and Canada because first, my cousin lived in America, and second, because I hope to see a koala and a kangaroo, two very cute animals. Finally, Canada is the country of my friend, so sometimes I will be over to see my friend in Canada.Four years ago, I traveled around Europe with my friends for 16 days. We visited Prague Czech, Hungary, Vienna Austria, Heidelberg in Germany, and Munich.