Hi Lube - Next time, posting to the "Notebook" section will give you more responses! :) Here is the corrected sentences: I am a senior high school student. At half-past seven, we begin class. Between classes we have ten-minute breaks, which I think are too short. During breaks, I talk about everything with my good friend. These are the moments I cherish; when we are all together, always full of laughter. Although having to attend class makes me upset, my friends make me very happy.

I am a senior high school student. I start studies at half-past seven. I take ten-minute breaks during the class, I talk about everything with my good friends, this is the time I cherish, when we are all together, always fall of laughter. Although having to take a class makes me upset, my classmates make me very happy.