She is my best friend in senior high school. I find we have much in common. For example, we both like shopping, traveling* and watching* Korean* dramas in our free time. When I feel depressed* or moody she always tells* me “It's* ok. Don't worry, just let it be.” Although we are* not in same classes in eleventh grade, I think our friendship will* get better with time. Now we will devote ourselves to the future together (什么意思，不太清楚你想说什么）. And I really appreciate our friendship*

You should post it in the Notes section where you can see our colored corrections clearly. It is also better if you provide a Chinese version. In most cases, we are guessing at what you are trying to say. She is my best friend in senior high school. We have much in common -- we both like shopping, travelling and watching Korean drama during our free time. When I am sad or moody, she would always tell me “That's ok. Don't worry. Jjust let it be.” Although we were not in the same classes during eleventh grade, our friendship got better with time. Now we will devote ourselves to walking together on our road of future. I do appreciate to know what a pal she is.