Please correct Academic writing
Could you correct these sentences please?
There are contradictory findings between acculturation and Latino health.
Further studies are needed in various themes such as "quality of family interaction", accessibility of medical care and mental health, and " initiation of dietary change" in order to explore the "complexities of migration and acculturation".
Thank you.
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Answers · 7
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You should post this in the notes section so that we can use coloring schemes to show you what is being corrected :)
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The first sentence is grammatical but does not have a clear meaning. You may have meant:
"The findings in the fields of acculturation and Latino health are contradictory."
It's not usually possible to help students with small extracts from their academic writing. It's crucial to be able to see the whole text because the meaning of one sentence has to fit the wider context very precisely.
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* for various themes -- not "in"
* "accessibility of medical care and mental health" - If you're going to put quotes around some things you should put them around all of them.
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