Please help me!!! Correct my part of the resume!!
Have you talked to any other university students who have participated in the OOO program? Yes / No

Yes. 학과 동기와 선배가 이 프로그램에 참여한 적이 있다. 그리고 현재 Social Media를 통해서 과거에 OOO활동을 한 사람들로부터 정보를 획득하고 있다. 참여한 사람들의 대부분은 OOO활동이 정말 인상 깊었다고 말했고 그들의 그러한 정보는 나에게 자극이 되었다. 그들의 정보를 기반으로 내 OOO활동의 방향을 설정하고 있다.

Yes. One of my major senior have been there. In addition, through the social media, I am collecting a lot of information from someone who were members of the OOO. Most of them say it was really impressive and their advices were good motivator for me. If I am accept the program, I will redirect my ways to act as a member of the OOO based on their information.

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Please help me!!! Correct my part of the resume!!
Have you talked to any other university students who have participated in the OOO program? Yes / No

Yes. 학과 동기와 선배가 이 프로그램에 참여한 적이 있다. 그리고 현재 Social Media를 통해서 과거에 OOO활동을 한 사람들로부터 정보를 획득하고 있다. 참여한 사람들의 대부분은 OOO활동이 정말 인상 깊었다고 말했고 그들의 그러한 정보는 나에게 자극이 되었다. 그들의 정보를 기반으로 내 OOO활동의 방향을 설정하고 있다.

Yes. One of my major senior have been there. In addition, through the social media, I am collecting a lot of information from someone who were members of the OOO. Most of them say it was really impressive and their advices were good motivator for me. If I am accept the program, I will redirect my ways to act as a member of the OOO based on their information.

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I am not sure what you meant by "major senior", but I had assumed that this is okay, and I changed it to "One of my major seniors". "One of my major seniors" implies that you have more than one "major senior" and you are referring to only one of them, so "seniors" is plural.

I also was not sure what was meant by "I will redirect my ways"

Yes. One of my major seniors has been there. In addition, through social media, I am collecting a lot of information from someone who was a member of the OOO. Most of them say it was really impressive and their advice was a good motivator for me. If I am accepted into this program, I will redirect my ways to act as a member of the OOO based on the information that I have received.

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